Lament
Free verse.32 total reviews
Comment from VICTIMEYES
this has some great imagery, very unique phrasing ... the star shedding petals is a good one and the way it ends on that musical lament is very good also.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
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this has some great imagery, very unique phrasing ... the star shedding petals is a good one and the way it ends on that musical lament is very good also.
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
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I am so grateful for your great review !
Comment from HalfHoff
ahhhhhh wow! This is just sooo peaceful and very visual ... I loved it! you must be a poet or something ... XO Lea Ann
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
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ahhhhhh wow! This is just sooo peaceful and very visual ... I loved it! you must be a poet or something ... XO Lea Ann
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
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LOL, I love this review ! Thank you so much .