Hot Dawg
with extra mascara35 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so funny! I couldn't help but laugh at the twist! The line "SHE FIXED HIM" is a great punchline! I love how you set up expectations and then completely surprise me with that last line. I really enjoy the wit you bring to your writing. Keep those great ideas coming!
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Your poem is so funny! I couldn't help but laugh at the twist! The line "SHE FIXED HIM" is a great punchline! I love how you set up expectations and then completely surprise me with that last line. I really enjoy the wit you bring to your writing. Keep those great ideas coming!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from pome lover
well, she certainly did. That doggie looks a bit mixed up about it all, if you ask me; pink tail and macho spiked collar. wow.
Ow maybe he's thinking, "yeah. so?"
He has a sense of humor.
Katharine
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well, she certainly did. That doggie looks a bit mixed up about it all, if you ask me; pink tail and macho spiked collar. wow.
Ow maybe he's thinking, "yeah. so?"
He has a sense of humor.
Katharine
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from kahpot
Ha! I may have to ponder on this one for a while, as i am trying to figure out who she is, another dog or owner, even though unsure I am still smiling as my imagination carries on, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Ha! I may have to ponder on this one for a while, as i am trying to figure out who she is, another dog or owner, even though unsure I am still smiling as my imagination carries on, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Making our dogs happy and content is easier than we think as they are naturally positive animals and aim to please, or does gay mean something quite different here? Love Dolly x x x
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Making our dogs happy and content is easier than we think as they are naturally positive animals and aim to please, or does gay mean something quite different here? Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
Comment from Sallyo
Ooooh ouchy! Poor dog. (Mind, three of our boy dogs are fixed.) This one is funny and unusual- probably the most innovative of the responses I've seen for this prompt.
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Ooooh ouchy! Poor dog. (Mind, three of our boy dogs are fixed.) This one is funny and unusual- probably the most innovative of the responses I've seen for this prompt.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
