Narcissistic Love
Trapped in an unhealthy love34 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Your five-seven-five resonated with me because I have met, as we all have, people who are more in love with themselves than they are with others. Well composed.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Your five-seven-five resonated with me because I have met, as we all have, people who are more in love with themselves than they are with others. Well composed.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review and for sharing what you've experienced as well.xoxo
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a spot one 5-7-5 poem about narcissistic love. It's all about control. Sometimes they control slowly and before you know it your in so deep that it's hard to escape.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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This is a spot one 5-7-5 poem about narcissistic love. It's all about control. Sometimes they control slowly and before you know it your in so deep that it's hard to escape.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia! It's really sad to know people who go through this.
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You're welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting and thought provoking 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely evening and may God give you an abundantly blessed new year. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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This is an interesting and thought provoking 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely evening and may God give you an abundantly blessed new year. Patricia.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. It is pretty intense to be stuck in a relationship like that. I'm thankful to have escaped one over 30 years ago.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem packs a powerful punch with just a few words! The line "Marred by your poison" really stands out to me. The idea of being "chained by emotional trap" feels so intense. Your poem hits hard and leaves me thinking.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Your poem packs a powerful punch with just a few words! The line "Marred by your poison" really stands out to me. The idea of being "chained by emotional trap" feels so intense. Your poem hits hard and leaves me thinking.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you, it is sad to know people who experience this type of a trap. I escaped from one 30 years ago.
