Better To Not Go Out and Play
Refugees struggle to find a home. The children suffer.32 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a goods one, Barry. You have described a situation that could be in a number of countries. I thank my lucky stars every day that I live in the United States.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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That's a goods one, Barry. You have described a situation that could be in a number of countries. I thank my lucky stars every day that I live in the United States.
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Paul thanks for the review. Yes, we are both lucky to live in our respective countries. I do not know how some of the refugees keep going. More strength to them. You keep well and all the best for the festive season.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from patcelaw
This poem has a very poignant message and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is so sad when children do not have a place where they can go out and play. My children are very fortunate in as much as we had a very safe neighborhood where they could go out and play. Unfortunately many today do not have those places. Patricia
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This poem has a very poignant message and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is so sad when children do not have a place where they can go out and play. My children are very fortunate in as much as we had a very safe neighborhood where they could go out and play. Unfortunately many today do not have those places. Patricia
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Patricia,
Thanks so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed it. I feel very strongly about this topic and every little bit that can be done for them can only be good for them.
Regards
Barry Penfold.