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I Still Love You More

To Kenzie Jo, my granddaughter ~ in monorhyme

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Well done. And it is hard to squeeze out all the same rhyming sounding words. You and Kenzie are lucky. I hope your turkey day was good. Me and my sister's played some old games. Racko and Yahoo. I haven't played games in ages. I creamed 'em. I won 3 out 5. We were laughing like lunatics. It was swell:-)

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    I love hearing that your Thanksgiving was so much fun with your sister. We play lots of games too and have so much fun. We all bring a bag of coins with because we play one call horses, and a little dice, and of course some without money too. The main thing is it is nice to be with family.
    Thanks for the sweet review. Take care and we will talk soon!
    Lotsa love, Debi
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 30-Nov-2024
    It was as if we were in elementary school. We had the giggles. It was wonderful. No fighting or fussing at all. Just joy. :-)
Comment from Ric Myworld
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AWWW! This is so sweet, and even makes an old bear like me get a lump in the throat. Must mean I'm part frog or something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another of our touching poems!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thanks so much, Ric, for this awesome review for my Kenzie Jo's I love you more poem. It does mean the world to me. You are so kind. Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
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Sorry, but how can this be anything less then a six!

With a phone call or FaceTime we get to hear them, see them or both.

But with a text, that can be done anytime and as simple as sending a smiley face.

Your text led you to a complete poem. How great is that, grandma?

Loved it Debi. Grandkids are great. They're an extension of our kids.

Doesn't get much better.

Love ya.
John

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Hello my wonderful brother. Thank you for this awesome review with the kindest comments and the lovely six stars. You are so sweet. Did you hear from James today too. He dropped by to see me and it was so good to see him too. Thanks again for all the sweet things you said, little brother. Awe, only a couple more weeks of calling you little brother. Haha. I hope you had a nice thanksgiving and so glad you liked your smashup. You are going to love the one from your birthday. Take care and thanks again, my awesome bro.
    Lotsa love, Debi
reply by jmdg1954 on 30-Nov-2024
    No. The last time James and I communicated was in the summer.
    Do you have an email address for him? If not, I'll PM him here and wait till he signs on. Last he told me, he doesn't sign onto FanStory to often.
    I hope all is well with him.

    John
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Sorry I didn't get back to you but it sounded like something heavy was going on with him.
reply by jmdg1954 on 02-Dec-2024
    James actually sent me a long PM, and yes, he's carrying a heavy load at the moment.
    I answered him back as a brother should., I've gotten to know 2 wonderful individuals here, James and somrone named Debi. I consider them family and though from a long distance, will do my best to be there for them!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another tribute poem to your grand daughter. I like the cursive writing and the heartfelt emotions of the poem. I like the last lines the best

So, hear my emotions outpour

I'll always love you more, and more, and more!!!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    what an awesome review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
    Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is absolutely adorable. I loved it. I am so happy you and Kenzie have such a great relationship. Arianna, my 21-year-old granddaughter and I have a similar relationship. I understand. The little ones and I have a wonderful relationship. It will be fun watching those relationships grow.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
    Hi Barb, amazing but McKenzie, (her real name) is also 21 and I love that she will start it with me still in our text messages. We are good grandmas, Barb, and it just goes to show me, what a terrific job you have done too.

    When a 21 year old who is self confident and doing well, and they still have time to play little games with old memories and be there for you. It means You have been a good grandma. I don't doubt you have that with yours too. I bet she adores you right back, as Kenzie does me. I am a little partial to her but maybe because she was here and I did daycare the whole time Kenzie was growing up.

    However it doesn't mean I don't love the other 5 just as much, as I treasure and have my great times with them too.
reply by barbara.wilkey on 29-Nov-2024
    I do understand. I love my grandsons so much too, but it's completely different.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi
This is a quickly flowing poem which tells how all mother/daughter relationships should be, but sadly aren't.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a fabulous weekend
Joan

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Joan, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Dec-2024
    You are most kindly welcome. Sometimes life gets in the way. No apologies necessary.
    Merry Christmas
    Joan
Comment from karenina
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Sweet!

My grands and I have simular, heartfelt exchanges. It's the blessing of being a grandma! I love you to the moon and beyond, I love you times infinity, I love you a bushel more than you love me...

Every expression is golden and your monorhymed poem reminds me to never stop expressing love, for only God knows when our time here is through!

Blessings!

Karenina

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Dearest K, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind. We were goofing around texting again and I started to write her a little poem with part of these lines and then I thought, I might as well finish it and use it. Thanks again and I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by karenina on 02-Dec-2024
    Even when you're tardy you're faster than me!

    :)
Comment from Sally Law
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Dear Debi Lee,
How sweet is this! We love our Grands, don't we? It begins in the womb and continues forever. What a beautiful poem of your love and bond with Kenzie Jo. A virtual six and compliments.
Sending you my best today as always, and Love & Blessings across the miles.
Sally Marie XOs

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Dear Sally Marie
    I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Sally Law on 02-Dec-2024
    You are not behind, dear friend. That title belongs to me! You're most welcome. Love ya bunches,
    Sally Marie XOs
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is such a cute poem for Kenzie. You obviously have a wonderful relationship with her. I'm glad she's keeping up with her artwork, as she's a great artist. Your collection of pictures is very special. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Hi Carol, what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
    Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by Carol Clark2 on 03-Dec-2024
    Your love for Kenzie shines through your words in this poem. Blessings. Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Awwww, Debi, what a sweet tradition you two have. I love the way you tracked back across time and brought up the situations you both had the opportunity to share the message of love.

Your poem is well written and eloquently expressed. The progression of the storyline works well with the repetition of "I love you more."

Love and hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Hi Rhonda, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 03-Dec-2024
    Oh, Debi, I so understand getting behind!! It seems to be my normal operating procedure these days.
    Much love,
    Rhonda