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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from judiverse
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You had some great details and brought in some extra guests. I'm glad they were able to make the trip. And Roy came all the way from Australia and Dolly from England, and for what--a food fight? It turned out to be quite an event. It seems like the occasion has turned out to be a big deal, with so many writing their version. It was great to imagine such a convention. I think it would be a great idea to actually have one, although I probably couldn't attend. judi
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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    It would be great if we could all be there. I would love to actually meet my FanStory family, but I would want to do it in a small group. I don't do large functions.
Comment from nomi338
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Wow! That was some party. Today I have a slight hangover from all the libations I imbibed. I think maybe next time I will exercise a little more discretion, not drinking so much. It is just that I so enjoyed meeting everyone in person. Let's jus say I was overwhelmed.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    LOL Thank you for the kind review. I am a complete tea drinker. So doing good. LOL
Comment from Neonewman
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I enjoyed this excellent addition to Rachelle and Gretchen's book, Detour. I have enjoyed reading everyone's additions and hope my muse will show up soon. Thank you, Barbara, for sharing your virtual experience.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    My muse took a vacation, and I honestly didn't think I'd come up with anything. I guess I did, but am not really happy with it. Thank you for the support.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wow Barbara, you mentioned so many Fanstory friends here and it sounds like your shyness soon disappeared after you me up with everybody at this convention! I simple loved your warm post, you took a deep breath and you went for it here and enjoyed the community spirit. Just one thing you need to change, and that's your title, you need to name if (Barbara Wilkey's Version). I absolutely loved it, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    I have made the change. Thank you for pointing it out and the encouragement.
Comment from Julie G1
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Totally well written, and amusing for this introvert here, facing a social group today over here in Oz. This reader enjoyed this real-world hesitation about ever leaving home, instead of staying, in, focusing on each genre and muse. Well done.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the support.