Shrouded
Three-six-nine35 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I think London used to get thick fog, which they called smog, like Beijing in China, due mainly to pollution, cars are more anti pollution now, praise God, a wonderful post D&V, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Oh yes, I think London used to get thick fog, which they called smog, like Beijing in China, due mainly to pollution, cars are more anti pollution now, praise God, a wonderful post D&V, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you Roy so very much.
Comment from tempeste
My best friend yesterday said that in these harsh times people should help each other .
She is right but the opposite is happening
the majority of the people are indifferent and are not willing to help each other.
It's a sad situation.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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My best friend yesterday said that in these harsh times people should help each other .
She is right but the opposite is happening
the majority of the people are indifferent and are not willing to help each other.
It's a sad situation.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much.
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My pleasure!😐
Comment from Gloria ....
Hello D&V. I like the tone of this piece, but for this contest you will need to write two more stanzas as three are required. An easy edit I am sure.
Also a typo with invisability (invisibility)
Wishing you great luck with the contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hello D&V. I like the tone of this piece, but for this contest you will need to write two more stanzas as three are required. An easy edit I am sure.
Also a typo with invisability (invisibility)
Wishing you great luck with the contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank YOU, Gloria. I will do this asap. I appreciate your help. Don
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written 369 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This is a very well written 369 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
In few words you capture, Don, you capture for me a sense of the walker becoming one with his environment and literally disappearing into the mists of time and other worldliness. A mesmerising image. Thank you for sharing your strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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In few words you capture, Don, you capture for me a sense of the walker becoming one with his environment and literally disappearing into the mists of time and other worldliness. A mesmerising image. Thank you for sharing your strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you Debbie, you flatter me with your kind review. Don
