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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Great job. I was laughing out loud. Excellent write.

He puts his hat back on and nods at the man next to him. (beside him.)

"That wackjob, Jane, bought the same dress as Rachelle," (Rachell.)

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much, Barbara. This was hysterically fun. Enjoyed meeting you at the 'fashion show' in the penthouse. Hope you'll join and write a chapter. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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So Tom turned up at the convention too, ha ha ha, you made me smile with your version of events here Gretchen and you and Rachelle have entertained us for weeks with you talented posts and I have loved reading every one of them, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Dolly. I'm glad you've joined in the fun. I appreciate your kind review and glad you joined up and added a chapter. Gretchen