Little things
A six-word poem50 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Well done on selecting six words that are meaningful and that resonate with the reader. I love the art/photo that depicts a small child picking flowers. It is really lovely and supports your theme. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Well done on selecting six words that are meaningful and that resonate with the reader. I love the art/photo that depicts a small child picking flowers. It is really lovely and supports your theme. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks very much for your kind words, Melissa.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a nice bit of worldly truth. It shows the simple beauty of each moment of a life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hi
This is a nice bit of worldly truth. It shows the simple beauty of each moment of a life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Joan.
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You are most kindly welcome,
Joan
Comment from Begin Again
It's those precious small moments that we take for granted but they should be held as dear as those big moments in our lives because they too are full of love, magic, and blessings.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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It's those precious small moments that we take for granted but they should be held as dear as those big moments in our lives because they too are full of love, magic, and blessings.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Carol.
Comment from Sanku
How true ,how true .In our old age we sit and go through all those collections of memories like the pebbles and stones we have collected .Special moments we keep close to our heart..very well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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How true ,how true .In our old age we sit and go through all those collections of memories like the pebbles and stones we have collected .Special moments we keep close to our heart..very well done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Sanku.
Comment from June Sargent
So true. Life is like a treasure chest fulled with little mementos collected through the years. And you said it all with just six words. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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So true. Life is like a treasure chest fulled with little mementos collected through the years. And you said it all with just six words. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks very much for your kind words, June.
Comment from Jacob1395
I think it's the small moments in life we remember the most, they can be something so simple but leave a big impact on us. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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I think it's the small moments in life we remember the most, they can be something so simple but leave a big impact on us. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks very much for your kind words, Jacob.
Comment from Wendy G
Ah, this is perfect, and the sort of thing I would love to have written myself! Great image to accompany your words. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Ah, this is perfect, and the sort of thing I would love to have written myself! Great image to accompany your words. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Kahlani
Ah! The beauty of those incidental moments that bring us joy. If only everyone could remember to take the time to treasure those simple times, the world might be a happier place. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Ah! The beauty of those incidental moments that bring us joy. If only everyone could remember to take the time to treasure those simple times, the world might be a happier place. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Big Message in just a few words. I would make one recommendation. Please consider increasing your font. Your words are getting lost on the page and also they are difficult to read and could cause people to not review. Great job on the poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Big Message in just a few words. I would make one recommendation. Please consider increasing your font. Your words are getting lost on the page and also they are difficult to read and could cause people to not review. Great job on the poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks for your review and suggestion, Marilyn.
Comment from talented150
I am in awe of how you can take six words and pen something so meaningful. It is true! And I will remember your poem forever. I love your picture of the little girl picking the flowers, because she's living life simply.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I am in awe of how you can take six words and pen something so meaningful. It is true! And I will remember your poem forever. I love your picture of the little girl picking the flowers, because she's living life simply.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.