Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

This is a beautiful piece for a friend. I cannot imagine the pain Nomi is going through at the moment, but I hope, with time, that she will be able to find some peace.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Jacob! I don't know any of the background to Yvonne's illness and the whole thing came as quite a shock, hopefully not for Nomi. Take care Debbie

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

Awe Debbie this gave me tears in my eyes, I don't know Nomi but I saw the poem Debi did for him and his wife too.
This is just beautiful and I'm sure it will bring him if only just a few moments of comfort. You are all such a great community of support for fellow writers its so lovely.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Nicki, for this lovely, thoughtful review. And, yes, I too hope that he finds comfort in all these messages because he's truly loved here. Take care Debbie

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Oh Debbie, this is lovely. I loved in the mourning but the whole verse was calming and peaceful for Nomi. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for writing for Nomi too. It will mean the world to him. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Debi! After you hit the right note so beautifully, this was hard and a first for me here. But Nomi is such a dear friend and has already been through so much, but with Yvonne at his side. So sad. Love Debbie

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
You've written a beautiful poem of comfort. None of us want to see our friends go through rough times, and it's great to be there for them. I didn't realize there was a book started. I'll add to it.

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Rhonda! I really hope this book can provide some comfort for dear Nomi. Take care Debbie

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 09-Sep-2024

Yeah, me, too!!! Like we say in the South, Bless his heart!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a very touching poem in honour of Nomi and the grief he is suffering just now, your gentle words are soothing and caring Debbie, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Dolly! I'm reassured by your lovely words. Love Debbie xx

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Debbie dear,
A beautiful rhyming quatrain for Nomi. I'm sure it blessed him and brought a great deal of comfort. So soothing and spiritual, my friend.

Dear Nomi, sending you my sincere condolences in your loss of Yvonne. May the Lord lift you up with His love, comfort and peace.

Sending blessings to all,
Sally XOs



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 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Sal, for your lovely review and for offering sweet condolences to dear Nomi. Take care Debbie xo

reply by Sally Law on 09-Sep-2024

My pleasure. I forgot to say a virtual six too. Just beautiful for Nomi.
Blessings,
Sql Xoxo's