Belated Irish Wish
For Nicki B.41 total reviews
Comment from Colorado Owl
Another wonderful poem, Debi! It sounds like you have a great group of friends who are blessed by your words. I'm thinking that you live in Ireland, which reminds me that I must visit that isle of my grandparents some day.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Another wonderful poem, Debi! It sounds like you have a great group of friends who are blessed by your words. I'm thinking that you live in Ireland, which reminds me that I must visit that isle of my grandparents some day.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Colorado Owl, no, I live in Minnesota in the US, but I do these birthday tributes to friends I have made along the way here on FS. I try to make their days special. If you would like a biographical or other kind of poem for your birthday just let me know the date.
I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from HarryT
Lines three and four of second stanza don't rhyme. While all other couplets work and are not forced. There is a nice flowing affect and a feeling of joy with life.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Lines three and four of second stanza don't rhyme. While all other couplets work and are not forced. There is a nice flowing affect and a feeling of joy with life.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Harry, i appreciated your feedback. It is really hard to come up with the perfect rhyme every time when you are given the information to put in these poems. But I did agree with you and changed it right away.
Thanks for the kind comments you made. Love, Debi
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Love your poems.
Comment from gansach
What a lovely photo! Ireland is one of my favorite places and where I would live if I couldn't live in America. A belated Happy Birthday to Nicki B.. Your poem is lovely in its description and rhyme. Very nicely done, Debi!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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What a lovely photo! Ireland is one of my favorite places and where I would live if I couldn't live in America. A belated Happy Birthday to Nicki B.. Your poem is lovely in its description and rhyme. Very nicely done, Debi!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Gail, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Wow. I think you outdid yourself with these two beautiful YouTube music videos and an inviting beach photo. Theni of course, the rhyming poem is always very good and I will check out her poems.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Wow. I think you outdid yourself with these two beautiful YouTube music videos and an inviting beach photo. Theni of course, the rhyming poem is always very good and I will check out her poems.
Well done.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Lisa, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from Harry Craft
Well, Debbie. You've done it again. Another masterpiece! I enjoyed reading this one. The rhyming scheme was excellent and the message was sweet too! The picture fits perfectly and therefore, you have an excellent poem.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Well, Debbie. You've done it again. Another masterpiece! I enjoyed reading this one. The rhyming scheme was excellent and the message was sweet too! The picture fits perfectly and therefore, you have an excellent poem.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Harry, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
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You are so welcome Debi!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Do they do the "green beer" thing in Ireland? I remember decades ago, my Irish co-worker said when she started talking about St. Patrick's Day to her mother back in Northern Ireland, her mom said, "Now you sound so American!"
Thanks for sharing. I wished her a Happy Birthday.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Lol. Do they do the "green beer" thing in Ireland? I remember decades ago, my Irish co-worker said when she started talking about St. Patrick's Day to her mother back in Northern Ireland, her mom said, "Now you sound so American!"
Thanks for sharing. I wished her a Happy Birthday.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I am in bed. lol, but had to look to see if I had any reviews.
But how am I suppose to get any laughs with worrying about if it's really Irish? Haha! And nobody made any comment about my leprechaun chef named John. Now I wonder if she won't like it either. I'm glad you wished her a happy birthday. Thanks! Debi
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Okay. Better get back to sleep! 💞💖🙏
Comment from Teri7
Debi, This is a very nice and well written poem for Nicki B. You used great descriptive words and it is always nice to learn about someone on here I don't know yet. Happy Birthday to Nicki B. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Debi, This is a very nice and well written poem for Nicki B. You used great descriptive words and it is always nice to learn about someone on here I don't know yet. Happy Birthday to Nicki B. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Teri, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Happy Birthday, Nicki! I hope you had a very special day doing something fun and eating something fattening. And now a special birthday limerick...because, there's always time for a limerick!
There once was a girl named Nicki
when it came to gifts she was picky
she was given a ring
she said, "that old thing?"
so her hubby gave her a hickey!
I am available for BarMitzvahs!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Happy Birthday, Nicki! I hope you had a very special day doing something fun and eating something fattening. And now a special birthday limerick...because, there's always time for a limerick!
There once was a girl named Nicki
when it came to gifts she was picky
she was given a ring
she said, "that old thing?"
so her hubby gave her a hickey!
I am available for BarMitzvahs!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Marilyn, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, this is a lovely birthday tribute. Although I don't know Nicki, I'm sure that she will be thrilled to receive this poem. Beautiful photo. Did Nicki share this photo with you? Good rhyming. There's nothing left to say except to wish Nicki a very happy birthday. I hope her birthday was great. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Debi, this is a lovely birthday tribute. Although I don't know Nicki, I'm sure that she will be thrilled to receive this poem. Beautiful photo. Did Nicki share this photo with you? Good rhyming. There's nothing left to say except to wish Nicki a very happy birthday. I hope her birthday was great. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Sis, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a lovely birthday greeting, and it's really nice to meet a new Fan Story member through your fine description. Thanks for letting us know about Nicki B's writing and birthday. I'll check her portfolio when I can. You used your usual thoughtful rhyme on this sweet poem. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely birthday greeting, and it's really nice to meet a new Fan Story member through your fine description. Thanks for letting us know about Nicki B's writing and birthday. I'll check her portfolio when I can. You used your usual thoughtful rhyme on this sweet poem. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Carol, I can't thank you enough for the awesome review. Also Nicki would like to express her appreciation to everyone who made her feel so special. Love, Debi
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I'm sure Nicki loved your birthday greeting. Thanks for sharing. Prayers. Carol