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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Decision and the Aftermath"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
A coincidence here or there is bound to happen, but you have outlined an incontrovertible set. Very nicely written. I've enjoyed the play.
I hope you and Gretchen team up on another project.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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A coincidence here or there is bound to happen, but you have outlined an incontrovertible set. Very nicely written. I've enjoyed the play.
I hope you and Gretchen team up on another project.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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We're definitely banding it about in a serious way!
Thanks for the terrific review.
Comment from Jacob1395
I could feel Helen's anger as she was speaking and her fear at the thought of Rebekah comes through really strongly in your writing. A really enjoyable piece, I thought it was really well written and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I could feel Helen's anger as she was speaking and her fear at the thought of Rebekah comes through really strongly in your writing. A really enjoyable piece, I thought it was really well written and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for this warm and encouraging review, Jacob!
Comment from lancellot
An interesting chapter. An emotional woman and a cool calm woman have a hard conversation alone. Perhaps, there are no coincidences, who really knows. But, I thought the dialogue was very believable.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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An interesting chapter. An emotional woman and a cool calm woman have a hard conversation alone. Perhaps, there are no coincidences, who really knows. But, I thought the dialogue was very believable.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This is great to read, and appreciate the affirmation very much. Thank you, lancellot! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you and Gretchen are becoming closer even though there is a little sarcasm being thrown back and forth. I love your humour Rachelle. I fear that once Rebekah has a taste of life on the outside, she will never return to this humdrum life, but maybe I am wrong. Another fine chapter Rachelle and I enjoyed the journey, as always, your tale well written and funny, I was entertained and amused, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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It sounds like you and Gretchen are becoming closer even though there is a little sarcasm being thrown back and forth. I love your humour Rachelle. I fear that once Rebekah has a taste of life on the outside, she will never return to this humdrum life, but maybe I am wrong. Another fine chapter Rachelle and I enjoyed the journey, as always, your tale well written and funny, I was entertained and amused, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Yes, Gretchen and I do love teasing each other. Thankfully, we can both take it and never get offended. It's our cryptic senses of humor. Thanks for the very nice review, Dolly; very much appreciated. xoxo
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You both have a treat sense of humour x x x
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Its fun to work with someone whose humor complements one's own. I used to be married to someone with no sense of humor whatsoever. WHAT was I THINKINGGGGGG????!
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Shame you didn't share your humour with your husband. My husband had a dry sense of humour and when I was giving birth to my second child he told jokes and had me in stitches! Then out popped my second child! Ha ha ha x x x
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That's the husband I have this time. SOO much better!!