His Song
A musical love story38 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your words were uplifting and perfect as the two moved through life to their own sound of music.... Until mine stopped. I do miss his song, but I struggle through memories to still sing along.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Your words were uplifting and perfect as the two moved through life to their own sound of music.... Until mine stopped. I do miss his song, but I struggle through memories to still sing along.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Hi, Carol
I lost my husband too last year. And I do miss him. It's funny how grief
strike will strike you unexpectedly at times. You'll just remember a moment.
Thank you for your heartfelt review
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My heart goes out to you. It's not easy! I've lost many people in my lifetime, but his loss haunts me the most. Yes, something triggers something and pow!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, His Song, presented with eight AABB-rhymed quatrains, gives credit where it is due as the man in this relationship is providing the high notes which allow for the enjoyment of this "musical".
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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This poem, His Song, presented with eight AABB-rhymed quatrains, gives credit where it is due as the man in this relationship is providing the high notes which allow for the enjoyment of this "musical".
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you Bill for your funny comments that seem more unusual
Thank you for the nice review
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a sweet romantic poem. It made me feel as though you were singing it to me even though we don't know each other well I felt my heart sing as if in a symphony. The picture of the minstrel adds a pleasurable feel while enjoying the lyrical words and rhymes that encourage the reader to relate and enjoy.
Thanks for lifting my spirits.
Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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This is a sweet romantic poem. It made me feel as though you were singing it to me even though we don't know each other well I felt my heart sing as if in a symphony. The picture of the minstrel adds a pleasurable feel while enjoying the lyrical words and rhymes that encourage the reader to relate and enjoy.
Thanks for lifting my spirits.
Jesse
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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You are welcome, my friend. I wasn't sure you would enjoy this. But I'm glad you did. And I'm glad it uplifted your spirits because I know you need your spirits uplifted
Thanks for the great review
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You are right about that. My spirits needed uplifting.
Have a lovely day.
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You too
Comment from Nicki.B
This is such a wonderful poem. Full of love and appreciation for a loved one. Each verse brought new reasons as to how and why the person along with their music makes them feel so happy and loved. Taking all their fears ans problems away
It has lovely rhyme and as its a musical poem I was sort of reading it almost singing it so you captured love through music in the poem very well.
A lovely romantic poem for a beautiful Sunday morning, Thank you
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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This is such a wonderful poem. Full of love and appreciation for a loved one. Each verse brought new reasons as to how and why the person along with their music makes them feel so happy and loved. Taking all their fears ans problems away
It has lovely rhyme and as its a musical poem I was sort of reading it almost singing it so you captured love through music in the poem very well.
A lovely romantic poem for a beautiful Sunday morning, Thank you
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Nicki for understanding this poem
I'm glad I could lift your spirits for this Sunday morning
Thank you for the great review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
As I read this musical love poem I thought of the Aussie rock n roller who is my go to man for music, especially if I'm down. I like that through your lovely words, the reader can think of their own musical choir. Nice one Pam,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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As I read this musical love poem I thought of the Aussie rock n roller who is my go to man for music, especially if I'm down. I like that through your lovely words, the reader can think of their own musical choir. Nice one Pam,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, encouragement, and the extra star. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words flow like a dream here Pam and I enjoyed your rhymes, but most of all I enjoyed the sentiments, we meet people in life who make everything seem wonderful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Your words flow like a dream here Pam and I enjoyed your rhymes, but most of all I enjoyed the sentiments, we meet people in life who make everything seem wonderful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you Dolly for your wonderful, encouraging comments and for your excellent rating
Comment from royowen
You're rather good at fiction Pam, as well as being so good at the theme, the flow, the Meter and the rhyme, I'm wondering if you have a backlog of poetry in your poetic hope chest? Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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You're rather good at fiction Pam, as well as being so good at the theme, the flow, the Meter and the rhyme, I'm wondering if you have a backlog of poetry in your poetic hope chest? Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Yes I do Roy. I wrote a lot of poetry about 50 years ago (maybe a little bit less) and I've been polishing them up, sometimes rewriting them, but keeping the same theme
Thank you again for all of your encouragement
Comment from BOO ghost
BOO is reading...this presentation looks super good! The font and picture is nice. Musicians write love songs and ballads.
Your rainbow colors haunt my dreams,
but, then I see an eye that gleams
Emotions sent; emotions caught,
You always know when I'm distraught.
Oh, I picked a favorite quatrain. It was a hard choice. Every stanza is magnificent! You believe in your work. It shows by you promoting high! Without a blink of an eye.
BOO!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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BOO is reading...this presentation looks super good! The font and picture is nice. Musicians write love songs and ballads.
Your rainbow colors haunt my dreams,
but, then I see an eye that gleams
Emotions sent; emotions caught,
You always know when I'm distraught.
Oh, I picked a favorite quatrain. It was a hard choice. Every stanza is magnificent! You believe in your work. It shows by you promoting high! Without a blink of an eye.
BOO!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, BOO. you always encourage me and magnificent comments
thank you also for the extra star. It is much appreciated.