If flowers could dance
What a sight.36 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I also like the repeating line.
-Your poem is uplifting and joyful with flowers dancing,
colors mingling, music is playing:
"What a scene,
For love and romance."
-I like the ending about how your
heart would fill with glee
"Just to feel
They were dancing for me."
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I also like the repeating line.
-Your poem is uplifting and joyful with flowers dancing,
colors mingling, music is playing:
"What a scene,
For love and romance."
-I like the ending about how your
heart would fill with glee
"Just to feel
They were dancing for me."
-Very well done; I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from zanya
Yes and why not indeed ? Guess we can still allow our imagination to have carte blanche toying with this interesting idea - flowers can be a great inspiration -thanks for sharing
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Yes and why not indeed ? Guess we can still allow our imagination to have carte blanche toying with this interesting idea - flowers can be a great inspiration -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from artisart4u
Seeing flowers flowing through the air is nice to see.
I like your picture and how you wrote your poem and how it rhymes very well.
Good luck with your poem.
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Seeing flowers flowing through the air is nice to see.
I like your picture and how you wrote your poem and how it rhymes very well.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You've caught my heart with this one. If flowers could dance we would all be for the better for it. If flowers could dance our lives would feel much richer with love abundant over all the planet. These are the dreams of an elder person who loves flowers as much as you do. Thanks for lifting my heart way to the sky.
Jesse
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You've caught my heart with this one. If flowers could dance we would all be for the better for it. If flowers could dance our lives would feel much richer with love abundant over all the planet. These are the dreams of an elder person who loves flowers as much as you do. Thanks for lifting my heart way to the sky.
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from Teri7
Willie, This is a very nice poem you have penned-If Flowers Could Dance!
I truly would love to see that also. Flowers are already beautiful and to see them dancing would be an extra pleasure to watch and see. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Willie, This is a very nice poem you have penned-If Flowers Could Dance!
I truly would love to see that also. Flowers are already beautiful and to see them dancing would be an extra pleasure to watch and see. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from royowen
They can dance with the wind, as they sway from side to side, in a delightful melody, composed by creation, pleasing to eye and the sense of smell, what a delightful poem you've written Jesse, pleasing to the imagination, well done, blessings Roy
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They can dance with the wind, as they sway from side to side, in a delightful melody, composed by creation, pleasing to eye and the sense of smell, what a delightful poem you've written Jesse, pleasing to the imagination, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
