The Woman on the Train
A woman takes the train to work34 total reviews
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This work tells a sad truth about the world and human nature. It is poignant and bold as well. Thanks for sharing and happy writing. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This work tells a sad truth about the world and human nature. It is poignant and bold as well. Thanks for sharing and happy writing. Best wishes!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review
and excellent stars
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. Your use of rhyme is excellent. This flows so well. Well done on crafting such a moving piece. I thought you showed that sometimes we forget about others. The consequences of inaction is shown so well. The ending was so cold and that worked in sharing your message.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I thought this was well written. Your use of rhyme is excellent. This flows so well. Well done on crafting such a moving piece. I thought you showed that sometimes we forget about others. The consequences of inaction is shown so well. The ending was so cold and that worked in sharing your message.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review
and excellent stars
Comment from jessizero
I am glad this was fiction. I can too easily imagine this happening, though. You told the story well in poem format, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I am glad this was fiction. I can too easily imagine this happening, though. You told the story well in poem format, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review
and excellent stars
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
The term "Christian" these days is being abused the hypocrites who use the term are causing people to leave the church. Your poem says a lot about calling yourself a christian and actually behaving like one. I only noticed one small typo.
The Christian thing she coud have done (COULD)
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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The term "Christian" these days is being abused the hypocrites who use the term are causing people to leave the church. Your poem says a lot about calling yourself a christian and actually behaving like one. I only noticed one small typo.
The Christian thing she coud have done (COULD)
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I fixed the typo. Thanks
Thank you for your wonderful review
and excellent stars
