The Green Tonka Road Grader
A little boy that wanted to play with a road grader.31 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story beautifully captures the innocence of childhood. I thought you did a great job of bringing to life Harry's imagination and determination. The detailed descriptions of his surroundings and inner world made me feel like I was right there with him. I could see the dirt lane to the intense anticipation of getting the Tonka Road Grader. The twist of the tragic accident and Harry's incredible spirit in the face of adversity was both heart wrenching and inspiring. Harry's journey is unforgettable.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Your story beautifully captures the innocence of childhood. I thought you did a great job of bringing to life Harry's imagination and determination. The detailed descriptions of his surroundings and inner world made me feel like I was right there with him. I could see the dirt lane to the intense anticipation of getting the Tonka Road Grader. The twist of the tragic accident and Harry's incredible spirit in the face of adversity was both heart wrenching and inspiring. Harry's journey is unforgettable.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and thoughts. Harry