Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Chapter 13 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and it was a pleasure to listen to. Your sentence structure in your paragraph is very well done. Also use good punctuation, which is helpful for us. Who have vision problems. May you have a blessed day and may God bless you. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This is very well written, and it was a pleasure to listen to. Your sentence structure in your paragraph is very well done. Also use good punctuation, which is helpful for us. Who have vision problems. May you have a blessed day and may God bless you. Patricia .
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Shaking his head, Noah said, "Sami forgot about the alarm system."
Sami hung her head. "Sorry." She went straight to her room.
Heading toward his room, Noah muttered under his breath, "She definitely keeps things interesting."
From behind her closed door, Sami said, "I heard that."
"I'm sure you did."
I love this all the way through from start to finish.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Shaking his head, Noah said, "Sami forgot about the alarm system."
Sami hung her head. "Sorry." She went straight to her room.
Heading toward his room, Noah muttered under his breath, "She definitely keeps things interesting."
From behind her closed door, Sami said, "I heard that."
"I'm sure you did."
I love this all the way through from start to finish.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for encouragement.
Comment from Begin Again
Excellent! I like how the tension is disappearing and humor is taking some of the place. Of course, the undercover work is still tense, but at the cabin it's much calmer. Great job!
Two gremlins...
take girls one â?" five,
take girls six â?" ten."
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Excellent! I like how the tension is disappearing and humor is taking some of the place. Of course, the undercover work is still tense, but at the cabin it's much calmer. Great job!
Two gremlins...
take girls one â?" five,
take girls six â?" ten."
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I hate when those gremlins happen. I should have known better than put that dash there. I have written the word out. I appreciate the help.
