Willing Hearts
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I decided to read straight away and keep my eye on the sixth star this time. This was a good chapter. I wonder what's with Chief Baldwin, that's not the normal thing to do when you visit someone. He had the whole stroy from Noah, it's as if he didn't trust his account of events. I'll have to wait and see what crops up in future chapters. Well done, Barbara, anothe excellent chapter. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I decided to read straight away and keep my eye on the sixth star this time. This was a good chapter. I wonder what's with Chief Baldwin, that's not the normal thing to do when you visit someone. He had the whole stroy from Noah, it's as if he didn't trust his account of events. I'll have to wait and see what crops up in future chapters. Well done, Barbara, anothe excellent chapter. Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Galvin will cause problems later. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Barbara!
Another great chapter, filling in the gaps between the characters and maybe Sami and Noah getting to know each other a little bit better each day. Sami is still a very untrusting person though. Enjoying the story very much.
Just a quick note:
get busy. (") the quote marks jumped to the next line
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Good morning, Barbara!
Another great chapter, filling in the gaps between the characters and maybe Sami and Noah getting to know each other a little bit better each day. Sami is still a very untrusting person though. Enjoying the story very much.
Just a quick note:
get busy. (") the quote marks jumped to the next line
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I have put that pesky quotation mark back where it belongs. LOL
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The case of the run away quote! LOL