Wisdom
Something I wish to be able to do.35 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Did you mean (discern) = determine), or did you mean (decern) = to enter a judicial decree)? Not sure Beth? I understood your meaning here, we must recognise a lie when we hear it, as well as being truthful, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
  |
Did you mean (discern) = determine), or did you mean (decern) = to enter a judicial decree)? Not sure Beth? I understood your meaning here, we must recognise a lie when we hear it, as well as being truthful, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
-
Thank you Dolly. I really appreciate you review and comments.
Beth
Comment from RodG
The Poet here gives the reader good counsel. This advice applies to every aspect of our lives, whether it be the workplace or at home with our family members. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
|
The Poet here gives the reader good counsel. This advice applies to every aspect of our lives, whether it be the workplace or at home with our family members. Rod
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
-
Thank you Rod. Yes in does involve all aspects of our life. I apprevciate the review.
Beth
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. Very well-worded poem within the 5-7-5 format. I think that is something we all need to develop a super power in, especially these days. Nicely done. Good luck
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
|
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. Very well-worded poem within the 5-7-5 format. I think that is something we all need to develop a super power in, especially these days. Nicely done. Good luck
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
-
Thank you Marilyn. I appreciate the nice review and comments.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written 575 for the contest and I wish you a very, very best in the contest. The wisdom in this is extremely well said. May you have a wonderful day and a good week. Patricia .
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
|
This is a very well written 575 for the contest and I wish you a very, very best in the contest. The wisdom in this is extremely well said. May you have a wonderful day and a good week. Patricia .
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
-
Thank you Patricia. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Spitfire
Nicely done internal rhyme: learn and discern;
recognize lies. The message too is an important one. I wish I was able to do this too. Best of luck in the contest, Beth.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
|
Nicely done internal rhyme: learn and discern;
recognize lies. The message too is an important one. I wish I was able to do this too. Best of luck in the contest, Beth.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
-
Thank you for the review. I'm pleased you noticed the internal rhyme.
Beth