Willing Hearts
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Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! Things are happening and Noah has to choice between his work and protecting Sami. I think I might have forgotten something... why does she remain so touchy after Noah apologized so many times and its obvious he is doing his best to put her at ease? I am enjoying the story, of course. Keep up the good work.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
For your info:
"I made and error in judgement. (an)
"I had to try."
"I understand. (spacing)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Bravo! Things are happening and Noah has to choice between his work and protecting Sami. I think I might have forgotten something... why does she remain so touchy after Noah apologized so many times and its obvious he is doing his best to put her at ease? I am enjoying the story, of course. Keep up the good work.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
For your info:
"I made and error in judgement. (an)
"I had to try."
"I understand. (spacing)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you for catching those errors. I have made the corrections. I always appreciate the help.
Comment from Heidixoxo
Wow....I sure jumped into reading to far. I'm very interested in now starting from the beginning. Job very nicely done my friend. Best of luck and I look forward to reading more. Heidixoxo
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Wow....I sure jumped into reading to far. I'm very interested in now starting from the beginning. Job very nicely done my friend. Best of luck and I look forward to reading more. Heidixoxo
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I appreciated the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done again. I thought you did a good job of showing us how it is unfolding. With Noah's plan to keep everyone safe. And using the spare bedroom for added security. This chapter builds suspense! And while doing that I thought you did a good job in developing the characters. It seems to be setting the stage for further conflict. I could feel the tension!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Nicely done again. I thought you did a good job of showing us how it is unfolding. With Noah's plan to keep everyone safe. And using the spare bedroom for added security. This chapter builds suspense! And while doing that I thought you did a good job in developing the characters. It seems to be setting the stage for further conflict. I could feel the tension!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.