Guided by Faith
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Comment from nomi338
What a pleasing conclusion of a story that captivated me from the beginning. This couple captured my heart early on and my love from them continued to grow. I have no doubt that their love will prosper and grow. Another awesome job of writing stories that please.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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What a pleasing conclusion of a story that captivated me from the beginning. This couple captured my heart early on and my love from them continued to grow. I have no doubt that their love will prosper and grow. Another awesome job of writing stories that please.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from Daylily
This is a perfect and very romantic conclusion to a wonderful and interesting story.
I am glad you have been encouraged to continue writing. Congratulations on a terrific accomplishment! Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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This is a perfect and very romantic conclusion to a wonderful and interesting story.
I am glad you have been encouraged to continue writing. Congratulations on a terrific accomplishment! Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, the proposal finally came and I am delighted Barbara, this is a magical end to your wonderful story and I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness, the proposal finally came and I am delighted Barbara, this is a magical end to your wonderful story and I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was a nice proposal, and Seth got to Emma how she is the most important person in his life, and how much he loves her. And Emma got to show and tell Seth.... well, at least she said yes, eventually. I'm sure Seth and the town's folk will get to love and praise Emma for years to come.
Good job on completing your romance story.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Well, that was a nice proposal, and Seth got to Emma how she is the most important person in his life, and how much he loves her. And Emma got to show and tell Seth.... well, at least she said yes, eventually. I'm sure Seth and the town's folk will get to love and praise Emma for years to come.
Good job on completing your romance story.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. There are other ways to show true love other than sex.
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You are absolutely right. Now, ask yourself, does Emma show, give, or demonstrate true love to Seth in this story, at least enough, in 48 days to get him (an intelligent, good man) to propose? If your answer is yes, list in your mind what those things are.
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Yes, and I can come up with numerous ways. I fail to understand why you can't see it.
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Oh well. If you're happy with the romance then, that's all that matters.
Good luck with your publisher.
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I am happy and so is my publisher. He's working on my book about Cord and Allie now. He wanted this one right away, but I wanted to send it to an editor before he gets its. Then his team will edit it. I like to use a few editors to make sure it's thoroughly edited. On Wednesday I got invited to do another Author's Fair in August. So, my fans are happy too.
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Good plan. A good editor is worth their weight in gold.
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Even in my published books, I still find things I want to change, and they've been through three editors. I guess one can never get something perfect.
Comment from Begin Again
When he come inside, (came)
Awesome story and a beautiful ending.... loved the romance and how he opened his heart to show his love. In Case You Didn't Know is the song Mike and I danced to at our wedding. Got a chill!
And another Hip Hip Hurrah! for your novel being Published. I'm thrilled for you....
I couldn't be happier for you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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When he come inside, (came)
Awesome story and a beautiful ending.... loved the romance and how he opened his heart to show his love. In Case You Didn't Know is the song Mike and I danced to at our wedding. Got a chill!
And another Hip Hip Hurrah! for your novel being Published. I'm thrilled for you....
I couldn't be happier for you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I changed that sentence as I posted and still didn't get it right. LOL Thank you for the wonderful support.
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Not a problem...I do it all the time! LOL
Comment from estory
Well you came up with the classic happy ending, Seth and Emma style. Of course his proposal gets interrupted by the phone call, but he slips on that ring and turns the phone off and she finally melts. It is the melodramatic proposal we have come to expect, I guess, with the line through the backyard and all the notes forming a time line of their history. In a way it speaks to how these seemingly trivial moments can add up to a life. They seem to loom larger when taken in context. estory
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Well you came up with the classic happy ending, Seth and Emma style. Of course his proposal gets interrupted by the phone call, but he slips on that ring and turns the phone off and she finally melts. It is the melodramatic proposal we have come to expect, I guess, with the line through the backyard and all the notes forming a time line of their history. In a way it speaks to how these seemingly trivial moments can add up to a life. They seem to loom larger when taken in context. estory
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for understanding and the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Great! I enjoyed how Seth did his proposal. It reminded her of how their love developed. I can't figure out why men have to get down on their knees to propose. On this this TV show I watch, an elderly man had to get help when he took a knee to propose! If Emma gets busy teaching and taking courses as she plans, she'll be more understanding when Seth's busy working on a case. She's already seen what his job entails. I didn't have any doubts about Emma's accepting his proposal. She's had so many distractions, but now she can focus on her love for Seth. Congratulations on the release of "Love for the Win." I'll be looking for it. judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Great! I enjoyed how Seth did his proposal. It reminded her of how their love developed. I can't figure out why men have to get down on their knees to propose. On this this TV show I watch, an elderly man had to get help when he took a knee to propose! If Emma gets busy teaching and taking courses as she plans, she'll be more understanding when Seth's busy working on a case. She's already seen what his job entails. I didn't have any doubts about Emma's accepting his proposal. She's had so many distractions, but now she can focus on her love for Seth. Congratulations on the release of "Love for the Win." I'll be looking for it. judi
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely, romantic proposal, Barbara. Of course she said yes, lol.
I'm not sure if this is the final chapter by your author's notes. It would be perfect to end it here, but not sure if that's your intention. I really enjoyed your novel, and know you already have another ready for us, and it has nothing to do with Ben Colder!! Lol. Well done. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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What a lovely, romantic proposal, Barbara. Of course she said yes, lol.
I'm not sure if this is the final chapter by your author's notes. It would be perfect to end it here, but not sure if that's your intention. I really enjoyed your novel, and know you already have another ready for us, and it has nothing to do with Ben Colder!! Lol. Well done. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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LOL My next novel is being posted on Wednesday's. I'll post it this Wednesday and then start it on Sunday's next week. Yes, this is the ending. I need to check those author's notes. Thank you for the kind review.
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I sort of implies it's the end, but you never actually put it at the end... Now that doesn't sound right! I hope you understood what I meant! 😂
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I just did. LOL
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a beautiful chapter. I love the proposal and am glad she accepted. The dialogue was perfect. Seth and Emma are terrific together. Such chemistry. This was an enjoyable read. Well written!
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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I thought this was a beautiful chapter. I love the proposal and am glad she accepted. The dialogue was perfect. Seth and Emma are terrific together. Such chemistry. This was an enjoyable read. Well written!
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.