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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Valerie Wants Revenge"1950s UK brother and sister rivalry
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. Your story showing revenge backfiring is fantastic. Valerie's frustration comes across so well! I love how what starts out as simple plan quickly spirals out of control. Very creative. Well written. This was such an enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I thought this was great. Your story showing revenge backfiring is fantastic. Valerie's frustration comes across so well! I love how what starts out as simple plan quickly spirals out of control. Very creative. Well written. This was such an enjoyable read.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for this really nice review, Michael. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have one more story in this series of three. Does Valerie finally get her revenge? Thanks again, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
Good artwork and story to go with it, Sandra, and what a story it was. Valerie had concocted a very good plan with her friend Lizzie to help. They were very organized and no one had seen them so they continued on and took the bikes to the church. What better place to hide them, in the graveyard, even.
But the boys had a plan of their own, tell the police. It gets more complicated when Mrs. Stanstead decides she is going to be the one to gain from telling the whole story. But she didn't count on Father Thomas getting involved. Everything was in better hands that way, anyway. For all of her efforts and planning, Valerie was foiled again! I wonder if she will keep trying until she succeeds. Or will her brother figure out it was her. It will be interesting to see where it goes or if these are stand-alone stories. Well done, my friend.
One small thing
Lizzie whinged [whined?]
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Good artwork and story to go with it, Sandra, and what a story it was. Valerie had concocted a very good plan with her friend Lizzie to help. They were very organized and no one had seen them so they continued on and took the bikes to the church. What better place to hide them, in the graveyard, even.
But the boys had a plan of their own, tell the police. It gets more complicated when Mrs. Stanstead decides she is going to be the one to gain from telling the whole story. But she didn't count on Father Thomas getting involved. Everything was in better hands that way, anyway. For all of her efforts and planning, Valerie was foiled again! I wonder if she will keep trying until she succeeds. Or will her brother figure out it was her. It will be interesting to see where it goes or if these are stand-alone stories. Well done, my friend.
One small thing
Lizzie whinged [whined?]
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Hi Pam, you're up early, aren't you? I'm just waiting for my sons and then we are going out for lunch. My Mothers Day treat. I already have two lovely boquets of flowers from Graham's sons, which is really nice.
Thank you so much for your really lovely review of the second part, Pam, there is one more part to finish this off. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one; poor Valerie never seems to get her revenge when Reggie gets away with it all. But she did have the pleasure of knowing he had to walk all the way through the village dressed in only his underwear. Thank you so much for the golden sixth star, my dear friend. You have started my Mother's Day with a huge smile on my face. Love you lots! :)) Sandra xx
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I usually get up early, but my eyes are feeling droopy! You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review. It sounds like you are having a good beginning to Mother's Day. Enjoy your lunch and the rest of your day. Love you lots, too.