Here comes the moon
Japanese poetry club EKPHRASTIC POEM36 total reviews
Comment from IAMBardMichael
Beautiful imagery
Ripple light gliding on a glowing lake is interesting straight behind the blushing moon is also enchanting
Love the alliteration and the phonics
I'm not familiar with this type of poetry, but this was a wonderfully executed piece to read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Beautiful imagery
Ripple light gliding on a glowing lake is interesting straight behind the blushing moon is also enchanting
Love the alliteration and the phonics
I'm not familiar with this type of poetry, but this was a wonderfully executed piece to read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Michael, thank you so much. That means a lot!
Xoxo
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Here is where you shine, my dear Jess. Lovely presentation, of course. But your words, description is not only spot on, it is elegant. You do have a way with words as I always love your free verse. Great job on this one, my sweet friend..
Lotsa love, Debi
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Here is where you shine, my dear Jess. Lovely presentation, of course. But your words, description is not only spot on, it is elegant. You do have a way with words as I always love your free verse. Great job on this one, my sweet friend..
Lotsa love, Debi
(Virtual six)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Debi, thank you for your kind words, encouragement and for simply being the best!!
Xoxoxo
Jess
Comment from royowen
I like ekphrsatic poetry,Megan one takes an image and turns what they see, and turns it into words that describe that picture or piece of scenery beautifully, as you've done here Jessica, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I like ekphrsatic poetry,Megan one takes an image and turns what they see, and turns it into words that describe that picture or piece of scenery beautifully, as you've done here Jessica, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Roy, thank you so much!
Xoxo
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the beautiful scenery that you painted with your fifteen words! I can just imagine it even without your picture. I especially liked the "veil of rippled light
glides on a glowing lake"!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Loved the beautiful scenery that you painted with your fifteen words! I can just imagine it even without your picture. I especially liked the "veil of rippled light
glides on a glowing lake"!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Helen, thank you! That means a lot, truly.
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderfully worded and beautifully presented poem for the club event. I wish you the very best and all of your writing and I wish for you a very happy day.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is a wonderfully worded and beautifully presented poem for the club event. I wish you the very best and all of your writing and I wish for you a very happy day.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you! Xoxo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. When I taught first grade and taught the phases of the moon, the very basic four, there was a song I'd use, 'Here comes the Moon.' My first graders love it, I'd forgotten until I read your title.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. When I taught first grade and taught the phases of the moon, the very basic four, there was a song I'd use, 'Here comes the Moon.' My first graders love it, I'd forgotten until I read your title.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Barbara, I love that! I don't think I knew that you used to teach first grade! Xoxo