Attention Shoppers
Guy goes to Walmart for some ink.32 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This piece, Attention Shoppers, is pretty funny and takes the K-mart story from the beginning makes it important for this one. Nicely done. K-mart has returned for this moment.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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This piece, Attention Shoppers, is pretty funny and takes the K-mart story from the beginning makes it important for this one. Nicely done. K-mart has returned for this moment.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Loved that place.
Comment from Tre way
So I gave you three stars congratulations it did keep my interest for a little while I wasn't really trying to plan on reading it you put a little work into at least you thought about what you were going to do but in retrospect of what I'm trying to do I'm not really thinking about your view of the situation I just want to know how this formulated so that I can try to perfect it the best way I can and I'm going to learn from your mistakes thank you
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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So I gave you three stars congratulations it did keep my interest for a little while I wasn't really trying to plan on reading it you put a little work into at least you thought about what you were going to do but in retrospect of what I'm trying to do I'm not really thinking about your view of the situation I just want to know how this formulated so that I can try to perfect it the best way I can and I'm going to learn from your mistakes thank you
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thank you...but enlighten me on my mistakes so I can learn with you.
