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keep your hope alive....

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Comment from mermaids
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Your 5-7-5 form creates feelings and emotions. Writers do express emotions through the pen and blood is a perfect analogy of what develops through an author's writing. Excellent use of words that describes well what writers do.

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    yup! thank you mermaid :-)