Note to Lady Raven
A little gothic valentine33 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Ah, Clockwise,
Much enjoyed.
Appreciated the short lines and the images rendered.
Reminded me of one of my favorite poems by Samuel Hoffenstein that I first read in high school:
Your little hands
Your little feet
Your little mouth-
Oh, God - how sweet!
Your little nose
Your little ears
Your eyes that shed
Such little tears!
Your little voice
So soft and kind
Your little soul
Your little mind...
~~~~~~~
My favorite lines of your well-crafted poem?
I guess my home
Was never you...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Ah, Clockwise,
Much enjoyed.
Appreciated the short lines and the images rendered.
Reminded me of one of my favorite poems by Samuel Hoffenstein that I first read in high school:
Your little hands
Your little feet
Your little mouth-
Oh, God - how sweet!
Your little nose
Your little ears
Your eyes that shed
Such little tears!
Your little voice
So soft and kind
Your little soul
Your little mind...
~~~~~~~
My favorite lines of your well-crafted poem?
I guess my home
Was never you...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, what a wonderful read, your poem of love covers all the good, bad, and acceptance (work) that a relationship requires, we know in our heart when love is real, very well written****kahpot
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Excellent, what a wonderful read, your poem of love covers all the good, bad, and acceptance (work) that a relationship requires, we know in our heart when love is real, very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is such a well-done, heartfelt poem. The speaker clearly feels unconditional love towards the woman regardless of the fact that he knows she is flighty. It feels as if she has walked away from a type of love that she doesn't realize how rare it is.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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This is such a well-done, heartfelt poem. The speaker clearly feels unconditional love towards the woman regardless of the fact that he knows she is flighty. It feels as if she has walked away from a type of love that she doesn't realize how rare it is.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. It's encouraging to know that my work resonated with you. Thank you!
