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Ulla
Hi Ric, I know the feeling. The story and the characters just won't let you go. There's some horrific fates in this part. Fast moving it certainly is.
Found this:
Pretending not (to) see Tammy's
Also the for me at suddenly changed towards the end. All best, Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
Thanks so much, Ulla, for your kind words, comments, and suggestions. They are always appreciated. It seems no matter what I seem to read right through those little mistakes. As for the sudden change about half way through, that wasn't anything I did. It's the formatting on that crazy advance editor. I redid it seven times and to get it to work right, then I finally just posted it anyway. I'll keep trying to correct it, since it's hard to read and understand like it is. Thank again!