Behind The Fall
A free verse poem32 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Water falls are incredibly symbolic of life, of giving, of securing life's flow. You've beautifully illustrated this in your beautifully worded poem, and excellent post Jessica, blessings Roy
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Water falls are incredibly symbolic of life, of giving, of securing life's flow. You've beautifully illustrated this in your beautifully worded poem, and excellent post Jessica, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
Comment from Navada
This is such a beautiful and reflective piece that explores the outward beauty of something we all admire and yet also acknowledges the deeper, darker reality beneath that we mostly overlook. The parallel with real life is telling and profound. Thank you so much for sharing this and best of luck for the contest - I imagine this will be a strong contender.
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This is such a beautiful and reflective piece that explores the outward beauty of something we all admire and yet also acknowledges the deeper, darker reality beneath that we mostly overlook. The parallel with real life is telling and profound. Thank you so much for sharing this and best of luck for the contest - I imagine this will be a strong contender.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024