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Thoughts for Sandra-Stoner Mitchell

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "On Faith Rely"
Sandra's brother Ian passed away

34 total reviews 
Comment from Julie Helms
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I am new here and do not know Sandra, but it doesn't matter as your words are universally true and beautifully stated. The first stanza especially sings to me of 'contentment'.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thanks for the review, Julie. It will mean a lot to Sandra that you took the time to review the poem for her, especially being new. When she gets back on the site, you will get a chance to know her. I like your last comment about the first stanza very much. Hope you enjoy the site.
Comment from Yusita
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Ah, what a lovely piece that makes my heart feel warm and fuzzy. This was such a delight to read. I loved the structure and rhyming patterns and the repetitions throughout... it contributed to its soothing nature. The words were so beautiful also. I so enjoyed this! The image compounded and complemented its charm as well.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thanks for the review, Yusita. I appreciate your comments about the poem and making your heart "feel warm and fuzzy." I am glad you enjoyed it and found it soothing, and liked the image, as well.
Comment from Ben Colder
Exceptional
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Beautiful, the wording is gratifying. I did not know Sandy was in the hospital. I must pray for her and send her well wishes. Thank you Pam for your thoughtful poem.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Ben. I appreciate your comments about the poem, and I know Sandra will appreciate what you said, as well. Sharing with each other is the least we can do for someone.
Comment from Jacob1395
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This was a really well written piece on faith. For me, it shows how having faith can strengthen a person. A really well written piece and I hope Sandra is better soon.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thanks for the review, Jacob. I appreciate your comments about the poem and I believe faith can strengthen a person, as well. Sandra will appreciate your good wishes, too.