Thoughts for Sandra-Stoner Mitchell
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Ian's Constellation"Sandra's brother Ian passed away
36 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
A lovely poem and a wonderful way to show your compassion to a fellow rider in front. I had said it. And I will say again that I hope peace will be with them. You've done a fine job with this calm and it's a great submission. I see no issues with aesthetics or subject matter it's great job. That's the pluck I hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
  |
A lovely poem and a wonderful way to show your compassion to a fellow rider in front. I had said it. And I will say again that I hope peace will be with them. You've done a fine job with this calm and it's a great submission. I see no issues with aesthetics or subject matter it's great job. That's the pluck I hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Lea.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The stars will brighten Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and her brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
Comment from w.j.debi
A gorgeous verse with an uplifting message. The meter flows smoothly and the rhymes are well-chosen. I love the positivity of faith that you share. Sandra cannot help but look at the stars and smile after reading this.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
 |
A gorgeous verse with an uplifting message. The meter flows smoothly and the rhymes are well-chosen. I love the positivity of faith that you share. Sandra cannot help but look at the stars and smile after reading this.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Debi.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The extra star will shine in Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a warm and wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Robert, this is a moving tribute to Sandra's brother. I love the way you compare his life and death to the stars. They were ever a big part of mankind's heritage, and now you've tagged him into a constellation.
Love the part about the lamp posts of Heaven's pearly gates. Great reference, and it just plain sounds cool!
Take care, my friend,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
Robert, this is a moving tribute to Sandra's brother. I love the way you compare his life and death to the stars. They were ever a big part of mankind's heritage, and now you've tagged him into a constellation.
Love the part about the lamp posts of Heaven's pearly gates. Great reference, and it just plain sounds cool!
Take care, my friend,
Rhonda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Rhonda.
Thank you for the marvelous review. The extra star will shine in Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and her brother. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert
-
I hear you, Robert. I?m so glad Pam set this book up. Poems and pros have poured in!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Janis M.
I know this is a more personal piece written for someone specific, but even reading it without context, it is beautifully written. The dedication of naming it Ian's Constellation is also very sweet and fitting.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
I know this is a more personal piece written for someone specific, but even reading it without context, it is beautifully written. The dedication of naming it Ian's Constellation is also very sweet and fitting.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Janis,
Thank you for the wonderful review. This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am positive Sandra and her family are feeling the prayers and the love her FanStory family is sharing with her. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem also with us.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
I am positive Sandra and her family are feeling the prayers and the love her FanStory family is sharing with her. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem also with us.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Barbara,
Thank you for the wonderful review. This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Mrs. KT
Incredibly moving, Robert.
Your message is heartfelt and beautifully rendered.
I've yet to experience the loss of a sibling, but I certainly have experienced the loss of many loved ones.
The following stanza resonated deeply with me:
He's joined a constellation
Of beams that shine each night,
A lantern for the journey
That guides us to the height.
Sending Sandra strength at this very sad time...
Much appreciated.
diane
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
Incredibly moving, Robert.
Your message is heartfelt and beautifully rendered.
I've yet to experience the loss of a sibling, but I certainly have experienced the loss of many loved ones.
The following stanza resonated deeply with me:
He's joined a constellation
Of beams that shine each night,
A lantern for the journey
That guides us to the height.
Sending Sandra strength at this very sad time...
Much appreciated.
diane
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Hello Diane,
Thank you for the marvelous review. The extra star will go straight to Ian's constellation.
This one was for Sandra and Ian. Their connection is forever.
Best wishes. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Robert