Writus Interruptus
A comic tale of one girl's encounter with writer's block36 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. I noticed that you even spaced things out to give a reader the sense of frustration you must've been feeling as you were trying to write. We've all been there. I have so many masterpieces that I think I've completely forgotten. lol You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. I noticed that you even spaced things out to give a reader the sense of frustration you must've been feeling as you were trying to write. We've all been there. I have so many masterpieces that I think I've completely forgotten. lol You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Alex! Yes, I tried to let the spacing reflect the mental gaps we experience when the words just won't flow. Good pick up!
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this really neat contest entry for the Writers Block writing prompt. You used very good and realistic words. I loved the way you typed the words and space you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this really neat contest entry for the Writers Block writing prompt. You used very good and realistic words. I loved the way you typed the words and space you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much, Teri!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! This is exceptional!! You have absolutely one hundred percent nailed it. But, instead of tragic, it's hilarious!! GREAT job, Mystery Contestant. I will be flabbergasted if this doesn't make it to the Winner's Circle. Can I just tell you that, whether it makes it there or not, it SHOULD. These contests have a poor consistency of having the talented works winning, what with all the "Family Voting Blocks" condoned by management and the unenforced "vote-fishing." But trust me when I tell you, if these contests were based on TALENT, this would be the sure-ass winner!! I haven't read all the entries yet, but it sure seems likely this one will be getting my vote. I absolutely loved it. xoxo Can't wait to see who the talent author of this is.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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OMG. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! This is exceptional!! You have absolutely one hundred percent nailed it. But, instead of tragic, it's hilarious!! GREAT job, Mystery Contestant. I will be flabbergasted if this doesn't make it to the Winner's Circle. Can I just tell you that, whether it makes it there or not, it SHOULD. These contests have a poor consistency of having the talented works winning, what with all the "Family Voting Blocks" condoned by management and the unenforced "vote-fishing." But trust me when I tell you, if these contests were based on TALENT, this would be the sure-ass winner!! I haven't read all the entries yet, but it sure seems likely this one will be getting my vote. I absolutely loved it. xoxo Can't wait to see who the talent author of this is.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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What a lovely review!! Thank you so much for that awesome feedback!!
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Totally my pleasure. xo
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poetess, this is a riot! I'm sorry I don't have a six but this is definitely my vote for the writer's block comtest. I'm still laughing.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Mystery poetess, this is a riot! I'm sorry I don't have a six but this is definitely my vote for the writer's block comtest. I'm still laughing.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Sally!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
My! My! My! She went and did it again. This is a pleasant writ on the challenge presented, and I know that many of us have walked that same path.
Be well.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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My! My! My! She went and did it again. This is a pleasant writ on the challenge presented, and I know that many of us have walked that same path.
Be well.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Its almost like an alternate universe where Jonathan Livingston Seagull never got written. ð???. I love the feeling of growing frustration and the honest way it's written.
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Its almost like an alternate universe where Jonathan Livingston Seagull never got written. ð???. I love the feeling of growing frustration and the honest way it's written.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much!