Comment from Alan Tryens

Excellent

Now that's funny. I've attempted some stand-up comedy myself with some mixed reviews. The spouse is always a good source of material. Especially if your thing is self-deprecating humor.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023

Thank you Alan. It is good to hear from stand-up comic. It must be very hard to write your own material. Not everyone has the sense of humor to even understand why something is funny.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I love this! I know of several comedians who use their spouse and their mother-in-law for jokes. It get more difficult when they are signed up for a television spot! Lol. Well done, Beth, I loved this. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023

Thank you Sandra. I'm glad you like this. I'm, not used to trying to write something with only 50 words.
Beth

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 21-Oct-2023

I know what you mean, Beth, but you've done an amazing job with this one. I'll be rooting for you. xxx

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an extremely amusing dribble. I have always found these difficult to write, especially if you aim for humour. However, you have managed a coherent slice of life that comes across well. kay

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023

Thank you so much Katherine. I'm pleased that you say is amusing. I have trouble making something amusing with so few words.
Beth