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The Makeover

A WITSEC Dribble Flash

45 total reviews 
Comment from Sanku
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Ha ha that was very funny .WITSEC ,I presume is something to do with make over of people by police to protect them?
You build up this very well only to do this twist in the end..

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    WITSEC is the federal governments witness protection program.
    Thank you for reading. Much appreciated.
    John
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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The picture is cute but makes no sense for the small story you wrote. Nice twist at the end. I loved it! You should have hunted down an old picture of flip Wilson as "Josephine". That would have been funny.
Karen

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thank you for reading and sharing.
    John
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh no! That's pretty awful that the witness protection organization had to go to such extremes to protect this narrator! And I wonder what in the world he did that was worth all that change. Great job with your flash story in only 50 words! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thanks, Helen for reading and the well contest wishes.
    John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, a trans gender in the making here John and I loved the humour and wish you luck with the contest. We live in a crazy world, but everyone should live how they want to live as long as no one else is harmed, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Dolly. I?m glad you enjoyed this little dribble.
    John
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Oh no you got me
Has no idea this would end far from where it began But the Levity at the end was fabulously humorous Well done And Good Luck in the challenge

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Super review and thanks for the well wishes,
    John
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, that would be an unforeseen complication! A clever dribble flash. Re the word count - I notice that FS counts a dash as a word, and also the three full stops, I guess because they follow a space. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Wendy,
    Thank you so much for a great review.
    John
Comment from LovnPeace
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oh my gosh. I gave a six for the surprise and silent chuckle. This was too funny. The visuals were great and foster the amazing ending. LOL Blessings, B. XO

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
    Wow, Barbara? thank you so much for a great review topped off by six stars.

    Thank you again. John
reply by LovnPeace on 15-Oct-2023
    Yes Barbara. TY
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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So, the witness is a man made to look like a woman? The government can do amazing things when needed:-)

Great story in 50 words. Good luck in this contest.

Pam

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Pam,
    Much appreciated.
    Cheers,
    John
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, John. I found the picture delightful. I was amused how you were able to fit in a competitive bikini contest. You gained loss some weight, had breast implants and has some facial surgery. All of those things gave way to the impossible. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Peace!!!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much for this phenomenal review!

    Cheers,
    John
reply by aryr on 15-Oct-2023
    So glad you enjoyed yourself, John. You are so welcome!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is superb John! How do you do it? The image is so cute so there is no way of knowing where your dribble flash is going. Then you give us the killer last line. Well Done and Good Luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Debbie. This is a great review.
    Cheers,
    John