Dressed to Kill
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Comment from Bill Schott
I think I followed the story along pretty, well, and feel you did well bringing me along through Shane's rise, fall, and final occupation, which is now out the window as well. I am assuming that the target did have his family with him and that saved his life.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I think I followed the story along pretty, well, and feel you did well bringing me along through Shane's rise, fall, and final occupation, which is now out the window as well. I am assuming that the target did have his family with him and that saved his life.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Bill,
Thanks for the review. Yes, Shane is now looking for another job. Perhaps I will do another story about his further adventures.
You are correct. The target had his family with him and Shane just couldn't do it. An assassin with a heart.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.