Guided by Faith
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Comment from nomi338
It just never seems to end, does it not? Emma and Chet are strongest when she does not fight against his attempts to be her hero. I pray she will come to grips with the fact that he is not going to abandon her despite he attempts to be independent. This new challenge of Ronnie Calhoun should prove to be an asset to Peggy Barton and an added irritant to Emma and Chet. I can hardly wait for the next installment.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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It just never seems to end, does it not? Emma and Chet are strongest when she does not fight against his attempts to be her hero. I pray she will come to grips with the fact that he is not going to abandon her despite he attempts to be independent. This new challenge of Ronnie Calhoun should prove to be an asset to Peggy Barton and an added irritant to Emma and Chet. I can hardly wait for the next installment.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Hard to belief these kids have only known each other for only two weeks. IA lot has happened within the short period of time. But how does one set timing on something bound to happen. LOL.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Hard to belief these kids have only known each other for only two weeks. IA lot has happened within the short period of time. But how does one set timing on something bound to happen. LOL.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is my first experience with your writing.
Not much into riding my books with cast of characters. And everyday normal things.
It's not that I don't want to do it.
I can write a romance novel, a horror novel, western.
I guess it's just my particular style. I'm stuck on now?
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Objective and Adjective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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This is my first experience with your writing.
Not much into riding my books with cast of characters. And everyday normal things.
It's not that I don't want to do it.
I can write a romance novel, a horror novel, western.
I guess it's just my particular style. I'm stuck on now?
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
My Complete Synopsis:
The Objective and Adjective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, just when we think everything is going smoothly, there comes a few kinks in the armor, or should I say, the kick in the butt people. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Well, just when we think everything is going smoothly, there comes a few kinks in the armor, or should I say, the kick in the butt people. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Romance is never easy. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Friendship bracelet...Ohh, Seth don't get pushed into the "friend zone". Ha!
Couple of suggestions if I may?
rumor mills will be busy. (I've always seen this as rumor mill. Maybe no 's'?)
Also:
What are you going to do about him?"
(What're. A very smart lady named Barbara taught me that is just how people talk)
A bigger issue is that the question wouldn't come from Seth. It's out of character. He's an alpha male cop, albeit a nice one, but he'd never ask her what she's going to do. ( I would know cause that's coming from an alpha male cop.)
Just my two cents.
Regardless, this chapter is another great one and added to the feeling that things are building to a final confrontation with the nemesis.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Friendship bracelet...Ohh, Seth don't get pushed into the "friend zone". Ha!
Couple of suggestions if I may?
rumor mills will be busy. (I've always seen this as rumor mill. Maybe no 's'?)
Also:
What are you going to do about him?"
(What're. A very smart lady named Barbara taught me that is just how people talk)
A bigger issue is that the question wouldn't come from Seth. It's out of character. He's an alpha male cop, albeit a nice one, but he'd never ask her what she's going to do. ( I would know cause that's coming from an alpha male cop.)
Just my two cents.
Regardless, this chapter is another great one and added to the feeling that things are building to a final confrontation with the nemesis.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the catches. I always appreciate help. Fresh eyes catch things the author reads over. I deleted the sentence, agreeing Seth is always in control or wants to be. LOL
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That?s what friends are for!
We should get bracelets. Hehe. Have a great week!
