Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Chapter 17 B"Can faith guide our path?
35 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, friends is putting it mildly from what little I've picked up on. LOL. Sometimes we tell ourselves things that we know aren't exactly true. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
  |
Yes, friends is putting it mildly from what little I've picked up on. LOL. Sometimes we tell ourselves things that we know aren't exactly true. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I didn't notice anything that needed correcting here, Barbara. Your story continues with Emma being closely guarded and cared for. The conversation between Emma and George goes well. He is obviously very anxious to settle the costs himself due to Marc's record but Emma will only accept a replacement for the car, no additional costs. Thanks for sharing your fine story. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
|
I didn't notice anything that needed correcting here, Barbara. Your story continues with Emma being closely guarded and cared for. The conversation between Emma and George goes well. He is obviously very anxious to settle the costs himself due to Marc's record but Emma will only accept a replacement for the car, no additional costs. Thanks for sharing your fine story. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
I love the closing line. It was exactly what I was thinking at that point.
Great job building the tension. Emma is warned to watch what and how she says things. Rich daddy wants to keep his son out of trouble so he is willing to pay expenses. He has to admire that Emma is not taking advantage of him and only wants what is fair. Too bad his son isn't like that and never will be with his dad always bailing him out.
It's good you remind us how long Seth and Emma have known each other. It seems longer, probably because they fit so well together.
Extra word in this sentence:
I'll to go back tomorrow."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
|
I love the closing line. It was exactly what I was thinking at that point.
Great job building the tension. Emma is warned to watch what and how she says things. Rich daddy wants to keep his son out of trouble so he is willing to pay expenses. He has to admire that Emma is not taking advantage of him and only wants what is fair. Too bad his son isn't like that and never will be with his dad always bailing him out.
It's good you remind us how long Seth and Emma have known each other. It seems longer, probably because they fit so well together.
Extra word in this sentence:
I'll to go back tomorrow."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review. I've fixed that sentence.
Comment from nomi338
I like the way she handled herself with George Elliot. I especially like how she quickly corrected statements he made about her relationship with Seth. I also liked how she displayed that she was not greedy by rejecting what must have been flashy, shiny and more expensive cars Mr. Elliot offered her. Obviously, Emma is no push over, easily distracted by greed or envy.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
|
I like the way she handled herself with George Elliot. I especially like how she quickly corrected statements he made about her relationship with Seth. I also liked how she displayed that she was not greedy by rejecting what must have been flashy, shiny and more expensive cars Mr. Elliot offered her. Obviously, Emma is no push over, easily distracted by greed or envy.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Good story. Clean and interesting. So the old boy wishes to settle things privately? Hope she gets a good car that she can pay for the insurance. Like said, it is high.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
 |
Good story. Clean and interesting. So the old boy wishes to settle things privately? Hope she gets a good car that she can pay for the insurance. Like said, it is high.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
