Fleshly Frenzy
The craving of carnal, copious, climactic commandment33 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Opal
A stunning alliteration indeed. Passionate and beautifully illustrated as well. This one made me feel like it could go on forever and dreamy as well. Good luck in your contest.
Kiwi
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Hi Opal
A stunning alliteration indeed. Passionate and beautifully illustrated as well. This one made me feel like it could go on forever and dreamy as well. Good luck in your contest.
Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from JSD
Ooh. Saucy stuff. Might have to mop myself down with a copy of yesterday's tv listings. Or really I should try to alliterate in my response. Flipping fabulous fiddling for fevered FanStory friendly fiends. Fun!
Fanks.
John
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Ooh. Saucy stuff. Might have to mop myself down with a copy of yesterday's tv listings. Or really I should try to alliterate in my response. Flipping fabulous fiddling for fevered FanStory friendly fiends. Fun!
Fanks.
John
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from Nathan Partridge
"Fleshly Frenzy" by Opal Rose is a provocative and evocative exploration of human desire and passion. The title itself, "Fleshly Frenzy," sets the tone for the content within, hinting at a tale that delves into the depths of carnal longing. Opal Rose's choice of words is deliberate and impactful, painting a vivid picture of intense desire that ignites the senses.
The poem's opening lines, "Unfurling feverishly, fluttering fervent fingers flourish," immediately capture the reader's attention with alliteration and a sense of urgency. The author's skillful use of language creates a palpable atmosphere of heightened emotion, drawing readers into the world of the protagonist's desires.
As the poem progresses, the author employs a range of techniques to convey the intensity of the experience. The phrase "forcefully fixating familiarly" suggests a sense of familiarity and yet also a powerful grip on something known. This duality in the wording encapsulates the complexity of human desire, where yearning and recognition often coexist.
Opal Rose masterfully weaves together words that vividly illustrate the protagonist's journey of fulfillment. The phrase "fulfilling her famished fantasies" encapsulates the core of the narrative - a voracious hunger for the realization of deep-seated yearnings. This line not only summarizes the theme of the poem but also brings a sense of resolution to the passionate buildup that precedes it.
In "Fleshly Frenzy," Opal Rose showcases a keen understanding of human emotions and desires, effectively transporting readers into a world of intense longing and satisfaction. The carefully chosen words, rhythmic flow, and imagery work in harmony to create a compelling literary experience. However, due to the explicit nature of the themes explored, this poem is best suited for mature audiences who can appreciate the exploration of sensuality and passion in a literary context.
In conclusion, "Fleshly Frenzy" is a captivating piece of writing that delves into the realm of human desire with fervor and skill. Opal Rose's mastery of language and imagery makes this poem a powerful portrayal of the intersection between the physical and emotional aspects of longing.
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"Fleshly Frenzy" by Opal Rose is a provocative and evocative exploration of human desire and passion. The title itself, "Fleshly Frenzy," sets the tone for the content within, hinting at a tale that delves into the depths of carnal longing. Opal Rose's choice of words is deliberate and impactful, painting a vivid picture of intense desire that ignites the senses.
The poem's opening lines, "Unfurling feverishly, fluttering fervent fingers flourish," immediately capture the reader's attention with alliteration and a sense of urgency. The author's skillful use of language creates a palpable atmosphere of heightened emotion, drawing readers into the world of the protagonist's desires.
As the poem progresses, the author employs a range of techniques to convey the intensity of the experience. The phrase "forcefully fixating familiarly" suggests a sense of familiarity and yet also a powerful grip on something known. This duality in the wording encapsulates the complexity of human desire, where yearning and recognition often coexist.
Opal Rose masterfully weaves together words that vividly illustrate the protagonist's journey of fulfillment. The phrase "fulfilling her famished fantasies" encapsulates the core of the narrative - a voracious hunger for the realization of deep-seated yearnings. This line not only summarizes the theme of the poem but also brings a sense of resolution to the passionate buildup that precedes it.
In "Fleshly Frenzy," Opal Rose showcases a keen understanding of human emotions and desires, effectively transporting readers into a world of intense longing and satisfaction. The carefully chosen words, rhythmic flow, and imagery work in harmony to create a compelling literary experience. However, due to the explicit nature of the themes explored, this poem is best suited for mature audiences who can appreciate the exploration of sensuality and passion in a literary context.
In conclusion, "Fleshly Frenzy" is a captivating piece of writing that delves into the realm of human desire with fervor and skill. Opal Rose's mastery of language and imagery makes this poem a powerful portrayal of the intersection between the physical and emotional aspects of longing.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023