Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Ha ha! Brilliant John! Your whole household is oozing personality - except for Lola (as I've yet to hear from her). Loved the dialogue and Darcy's stroppiness, also her comment about 'snappy' and 'puppy' not rhyming. You can see who's ruling the roost there even if Mom and Dad do eventually win the day. Well done - another smile on my face here! Debbie

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Our dogs are queens and king of the house for sure.
Thank you so much, Debbie.

Comment from Lee, Undone

Good

A clever story from a dog's perception, all dog lovers out there would love this for. Sure. I didn't like the fonts too annoying to read which was distracting but overall entertaining.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you gif taking the time to read and review this comical piece.
Other than the font, what aspect in the writing would you suggest for improvement? Typically required in a 4star review.