Guided by Faith
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I am glad Seth and Emma are back on speaking terms. There is one edit, "Face light (s) up." I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. I am glad Seth and Emma are back on speaking terms. There is one edit, "Face light (s) up." I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the correction. I appreciate the help and kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
You are very good at creating characters. Seth and Emma are very different in personality than the male and female protagonist in the other stories you've written. I'm enjoying thier interactions.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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You are very good at creating characters. Seth and Emma are very different in personality than the male and female protagonist in the other stories you've written. I'm enjoying thier interactions.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I think this was a well written chapter, and seems to follow your particular style of writing faithfully. In the end, you should follow your instincts. This is a world you are creating.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Hmm, I think this was a well written chapter, and seems to follow your particular style of writing faithfully. In the end, you should follow your instincts. This is a world you are creating.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JSD
A sweet tale continued. Your dialogue is so authentic and real here and draws the reader into the relationship perfectly. I envy your ability to make your characters so lifelike.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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A sweet tale continued. Your dialogue is so authentic and real here and draws the reader into the relationship perfectly. I envy your ability to make your characters so lifelike.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
Getting better, just wondering about the guy who is keeping tabs on the girl's movements. I know the answer will surface but it looks to me like some Nutt fascinated with this young girl.
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Getting better, just wondering about the guy who is keeping tabs on the girl's movements. I know the answer will surface but it looks to me like some Nutt fascinated with this young girl.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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The answer will come. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Things might be looking up for this couple after a shaky start, although I think there are still a few trust issues, an interesting post and your story is moving in the right direction Barbara, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Things might be looking up for this couple after a shaky start, although I think there are still a few trust issues, an interesting post and your story is moving in the right direction Barbara, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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You're right. There will be a few more trust issues. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I think this is your best chapter so far, Barb. It looks like we are going to see further development in the relationship. Having Ace sleep over was a great idea.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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I think this is your best chapter so far, Barb. It looks like we are going to see further development in the relationship. Having Ace sleep over was a great idea.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.