I Love You More
A Merry~go~Rhyme for my Granddaughter, Artist, Kenzie Jo41 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A sweet and lovely poem for your sweet and lovely granddaughter. She is beautiful as is your poem about her. I think this one is one of your best Merry go round poems.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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A sweet and lovely poem for your sweet and lovely granddaughter. She is beautiful as is your poem about her. I think this one is one of your best Merry go round poems.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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I appreciate your kindness, Janet. You are so very sweet. Thanks so much for the lovely words for my Kenzie, and her poem. I watched her for years so my oldest daughter, Michelle wouldn't have to do daycare. So she is like my own. Thanks also for the wonderful six stars, and for this awesome review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
How stinkin' beautiful is this poem. I love that you used your catch phrase with her throughout. Kenzie sounds like a fun free spirit. It's probably less like a granddaughter when the two of you are together, and more like two friends who just enjoy each other's company. Wonderful poem. Happy birthday, Kenzie. Gretchen
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How stinkin' beautiful is this poem. I love that you used your catch phrase with her throughout. Kenzie sounds like a fun free spirit. It's probably less like a granddaughter when the two of you are together, and more like two friends who just enjoy each other's company. Wonderful poem. Happy birthday, Kenzie. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully written and illustrated poem for your precious Kenzie Jo! I enjoyed this so much especially in the Merry-go-Rhyme form of which I am fond. You out did yourself on this one, better than a Hallmark card!
Happy Birthday Kenzie! God bless you richly and deeply!
Love and blessings to you all,
Sal XOs!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Beautifully written and illustrated poem for your precious Kenzie Jo! I enjoyed this so much especially in the Merry-go-Rhyme form of which I am fond. You out did yourself on this one, better than a Hallmark card!
Happy Birthday Kenzie! God bless you richly and deeply!
Love and blessings to you all,
Sal XOs!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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You are so sweet, Sally! Thanks so much for the lovely words for my Kenzie, and her poem. I watched her for years so my oldest daughter, Michelle wouldn't have to do daycare. So she is like my own. Thanks also for the wonderful six stars, and for this awesome review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
As always, your poems and other writings convey so much feelings and emotions, characteristics which are the essence of an excellent work.
This poem is innovative and fun, touching by the tenderness embedded in every line.
Very beautiful!!!
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As always, your poems and other writings convey so much feelings and emotions, characteristics which are the essence of an excellent work.
This poem is innovative and fun, touching by the tenderness embedded in every line.
Very beautiful!!!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem is full of love and fun. Not many people can live to see their grand daughter grow to 20 years old.
As a grand parent, everyone can see you loved her then and you love her now.
As many things have happened, all you see: she is growing more beautiful and smarter. And B you love here more.
Thanks for sharing
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This poem is full of love and fun. Not many people can live to see their grand daughter grow to 20 years old.
As a grand parent, everyone can see you loved her then and you love her now.
As many things have happened, all you see: she is growing more beautiful and smarter. And B you love here more.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
What a great poem about a granddaughter. Fun form. Favorite lines were: Your soul is sweet and kind
Your C r e a t i v i t y is from
Your talent and your mind
I bet she will love this, if she hasn't seen it already.
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What a great poem about a granddaughter. Fun form. Favorite lines were: Your soul is sweet and kind
Your C r e a t i v i t y is from
Your talent and your mind
I bet she will love this, if she hasn't seen it already.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem for your granddaughter's birthday, and I am sure she will love it. It's such an amazing gift to have precious grandchildren who love us. Happy birthday to Kenzie Jo.
Wendy
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A beautiful poem for your granddaughter's birthday, and I am sure she will love it. It's such an amazing gift to have precious grandchildren who love us. Happy birthday to Kenzie Jo.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Beautiful poem for a beautiful girl! I love this so much, Debi, and I'm sure it's going to mean the absolute world to Kenzie!!
"Love you more" is something we always say, too <3 happy birthday to your beautiful and talented granddaughter!
Xoxo
Jess
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Beautiful poem for a beautiful girl! I love this so much, Debi, and I'm sure it's going to mean the absolute world to Kenzie!!
"Love you more" is something we always say, too <3 happy birthday to your beautiful and talented granddaughter!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Oh Jess, you are so very sweet. And it is so good to hear from you. Thank you so very much for such a lovely review and the kindest words for Kenzie and her poem. I am not one bit surprised that you and your awesome daughters do the "I love you more" thing. I appreciate the six stars so very much. Thank you again from the bottom of my heart, sweet friend.
Comment from Paul Manton
Hi again Debi I loved this sweet tribute to your wonderful granddaughter. Is this the one who does the great designs? OK your signature 4/3 and also your signature 'packed with love and kindness'. With some writers this would be a sticky goo, but somehow you always manage to avoid that over-sentimentality. I should have spotted abab rhyme, which we both know requires a lot of time and effort. (Can you hear my London applause in Minnesota?)
Well, anyone receiving this would be mighty impressed - but I wanted to mention the last eight lines in particular: you only have 'more' twice - but six other rhymes without repeats - that is very skillful.
And of course, you can't get away without a 'helpful suggestion' from this bossy professor: 'JUST think of where you've been' will make it 'just perfect'. Happy Birthday, Kenzie Jo!
Paul
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Hi again Debi I loved this sweet tribute to your wonderful granddaughter. Is this the one who does the great designs? OK your signature 4/3 and also your signature 'packed with love and kindness'. With some writers this would be a sticky goo, but somehow you always manage to avoid that over-sentimentality. I should have spotted abab rhyme, which we both know requires a lot of time and effort. (Can you hear my London applause in Minnesota?)
Well, anyone receiving this would be mighty impressed - but I wanted to mention the last eight lines in particular: you only have 'more' twice - but six other rhymes without repeats - that is very skillful.
And of course, you can't get away without a 'helpful suggestion' from this bossy professor: 'JUST think of where you've been' will make it 'just perfect'. Happy Birthday, Kenzie Jo!
Paul
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Oh my dear Paul, I want to give you credit for that suggestion, but I had just made some changes and that - was one of them you must have reviewed when I was still editing . Actually I feel good that we were on the same
Page. Thanks for not giving up on me, my awesome friend.
Are you familiar w merry go rhymes ? All of my 2 line stanzas have to end w more for this particular one because it was about I love you more. But often I will do my last 4 stanza in the same rhyme scheme. So thanks Paul for picking up on what I hoped people would notice. You are awesome!
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My favorite Minnesotian - I post rarely, but I think you will like 'Trees' - even though it's set in Vermont.
Comment from lyenochka
Happy Birthday to your beautiful Kenzie Jo!! She's gorgeous and talented and I can see resemblance to you. Thank you for sharing and hope your whole extended family have so much fun together!!
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Happy Birthday to your beautiful Kenzie Jo!! She's gorgeous and talented and I can see resemblance to you. Thank you for sharing and hope your whole extended family have so much fun together!!
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2023