Beyond the Fireworks
Called home on Independence Day34 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Beyond the Fireworks, is a moving remembrance of your sister. The good times seem so few sometimes when we lose the ones who made them good. So sorry.
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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This free verse, Beyond the Fireworks, is a moving remembrance of your sister. The good times seem so few sometimes when we lose the ones who made them good. So sorry.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so beautiful and poignant, Jessica! And your reference to "With clouds in your eyes" is absolutely heart-breaking! How memorable this must be for you as though only yesterday, your fine verse is a magical and deeply moving tribute to your dear sister. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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This is so beautiful and poignant, Jessica! And your reference to "With clouds in your eyes" is absolutely heart-breaking! How memorable this must be for you as though only yesterday, your fine verse is a magical and deeply moving tribute to your dear sister. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Debbie, your words mean so much to me. Thank you.
Xoxo
Jessica
Comment from JSD
Aww. Another beautiful memory encapsulated in some lovely writing. This has a lilting rhythm to match its nostalgia and you sum up the relationship between you and your precious sister so perfectly. Thank you for sharing this.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Aww. Another beautiful memory encapsulated in some lovely writing. This has a lilting rhythm to match its nostalgia and you sum up the relationship between you and your precious sister so perfectly. Thank you for sharing this.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for these kind words, truly appreciated
Xo
Jessica
Comment from kahpot
Wow! what a beautiful though very sad read, the feeling of love, friendship, togetherness, and sadly loss is all in this exceptional poem and tribute, and I love the way you have set the stanzas for each step of this journey, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Wow! what a beautiful though very sad read, the feeling of love, friendship, togetherness, and sadly loss is all in this exceptional poem and tribute, and I love the way you have set the stanzas for each step of this journey, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, that means the world to me!
Xo
Jessica