Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your 50 word contest entry.
It is well written and relatable - so often we are cheated of the most poignant parts, or the best bits of our dreams by the alarm.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thank you Debra! I appreciate your feedback!:)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Alarm clock has done wonders to wake people up and disturb their either sweet or scary dreams

This is a short love story. A sweet dream awakes to face reality.

Thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback!:)

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

What a great story you have produced with this short amount of words excellent choice and subject matter very good idea you've brought me some Guinea pig and without a. Frost and without a confusion so really good!
Perhaps speaking about the loss of the spells for significant other. I know the pain of this having Lost mine and the young eggs and the heart goes out to those who do.
Your story is sad and melancholy but also very well written grammatically clean and aesthetically pleasing. I can't? Say anything I will change. Your boat? And therefore I find it a great submission I hope you have an awesome afternoon!

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 Comment Written 25-May-2023

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reply by the author on 25-May-2023

Thank you Lea! I appreciate it!