Comment from RodG

Excellent

You capture the MOOD and ATMOSPHERE of this scene, while putting us there on the Nile, perhaps lying on deck of a cruise ship. Very nicely done with only twenty syllables. Rod

 Comment Written 23-May-2023

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Thank you, Rod. I appreciate your encouraging comments.

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

Egypt has seen many generations and civilizations come and go all over this world. A really good poem. Simple but thought provoking at the same time.

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 Comment Written 23-May-2023

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I love all your memories in this beautiful place, Ginda! The visual, verse and presentation all combine to offer a feast for the senses. Well done and good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 23-May-2023

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Thank you, Debbie. I think I was Egyptian in my past life. I have written three books of stories and paintings on life in Egypt.