Guided by Faith
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Comment from judiverse
I still think there's too much about the sunburn. I suppose the idea is a way of bringing Seth and Emma closer together. Emma is going to be busy with her job, the reading program, and the two youth groups. Working with these groups will be an added attraction for when she decides on a permanent job. She is certainly energetic, and she'll be a good role model. Good that Seth is thinking about the safety of the reading group kids. By this time, Emma and Seth should be on first-name basis. Great development of the characters. judi
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I still think there's too much about the sunburn. I suppose the idea is a way of bringing Seth and Emma closer together. Emma is going to be busy with her job, the reading program, and the two youth groups. Working with these groups will be an added attraction for when she decides on a permanent job. She is certainly energetic, and she'll be a good role model. Good that Seth is thinking about the safety of the reading group kids. By this time, Emma and Seth should be on first-name basis. Great development of the characters. judi
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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It's getting closer. Also, the sunburn is going to play an important role, I promise. It wouldn't be there if it didn't. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This story is moving along very smoothly. I like that, but I'm sure that we are going to hear more from the Crown Vic soon. First names must also be coming soon.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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This story is moving along very smoothly. I like that, but I'm sure that we are going to hear more from the Crown Vic soon. First names must also be coming soon.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Yes, first names are on the horizon. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Alot of coffee drinking in this story. Enough to float a battleship. Glad to see how you are bringing these two together. Sound real to me. Sunscreen and all.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Alot of coffee drinking in this story. Enough to float a battleship. Glad to see how you are bringing these two together. Sound real to me. Sunscreen and all.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Police officers drink coffee. LOL
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The scene where Pastor Pat pretty much orders Seth and Emma to teach the youth classes reminds me of the time my pastor called and "asked" if I would be vacation Bible school director for the summer. I assumed he had made a prayerful decision, and I knew I couldn't say no. Later I told him this - that when your pastor asks you to do something, you do it. He replied, "You would then be surprised how many people say no."
I know I'm late to the story, but it sounds like their romance is still budding and I'll be around to see if flower. The writing course I'm taking is not keeping me as busy as I thought it would, and I've found more time to both write and review.
The six stars is for all the romance I know I've missed. I'm always amazed and in awe of those of you who can turn a chapter out every week. I would flounder after 2 or 3, I'm sure!
See you next week.
Pam
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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The scene where Pastor Pat pretty much orders Seth and Emma to teach the youth classes reminds me of the time my pastor called and "asked" if I would be vacation Bible school director for the summer. I assumed he had made a prayerful decision, and I knew I couldn't say no. Later I told him this - that when your pastor asks you to do something, you do it. He replied, "You would then be surprised how many people say no."
I know I'm late to the story, but it sounds like their romance is still budding and I'll be around to see if flower. The writing course I'm taking is not keeping me as busy as I thought it would, and I've found more time to both write and review.
The six stars is for all the romance I know I've missed. I'm always amazed and in awe of those of you who can turn a chapter out every week. I would flounder after 2 or 3, I'm sure!
See you next week.
Pam
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I'm positive you could do it. You're a great writer. Thank you for this kind review and the stars.
Comment from Cathy M
I've enjoyed this story so far. I missed a couple installments while on vacation and will have to go back and find them. You have engaging characters and so far, the story has kept my interest with the details of relationships. This section Carl is one of my favorite relationship characters.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I've enjoyed this story so far. I missed a couple installments while on vacation and will have to go back and find them. You have engaging characters and so far, the story has kept my interest with the details of relationships. This section Carl is one of my favorite relationship characters.
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Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for this kind review. Yes, Carl is an important character, too.
Comment from Jim Wile
Well, that was a nice surprise, Barbara. I thought Seth would have been the one to be hesitant about using first names, not Emma. Seems Seth is as perplexed as I am. Those two certainly are dancing around the issue of their attraction to one another. I love it. Jim
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reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Well, that was a nice surprise, Barbara. I thought Seth would have been the one to be hesitant about using first names, not Emma. Seems Seth is as perplexed as I am. Those two certainly are dancing around the issue of their attraction to one another. I love it. Jim
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Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement. I am happy to read you're surprised. I have a reviewer who says my stories are 100% predictable.