Comment from royowen

Excellent

Upon reading this, the scriptures pour in Like, "Satan comes as an Angel of light, to deceive, if it were possible, the elect," 2 Corinthians 11:14-15, or "he are like the devil, and the father of lies." John 8:44! This is a very thoughtful post, and a very thoughtful and lovely posting and warning, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you Roy, I really appreciate the review and the scripture you pulled up to support the poem. I had to work with someones chosen rhymeing words. It wasn't words I would have chosen but they worked out.

reply by royowen on 18-May-2023

Well done

Comment from Niki Marie

Excellent

Strong beginning even stronger follow through . Short but sweet and straight to the heart of the matter.. Raw and poetic truth. Obviously gifted.Nicely done.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thnak you for the excellent review and comments. It isn't quite as easy to write a pome using words chosen by someone else. I 'm glad they seemed to work.

Comment from Charles W. Johnson

Excellent

Excellent work in smoothly utilizing all the required rhymes while never deviating from your poem's theme. Meter was on beat too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you Charles, I appreciate the review and the comments. It was a fun poem to write.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

What a great job you did with your borrowed rhyming words. I can't imagine it is easy to use them in such a smooth way, but your poem flows naturally and fits all the criteria very well. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you Ginda. I really appreciate the review and excellent comments.