Thinking of judiverse
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Words Aren't Always Easy"For judiverse for the loss of her husband
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Comment from bob cullen
You really should be a sympathy card author. You phrase your words quite beautifully and in delightful poetic verse.
You phrase your thoughts so delightfully and always in beautiful flowing verse. You are an extremely talented and thoughtful writer.
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You really should be a sympathy card author. You phrase your words quite beautifully and in delightful poetic verse.
You phrase your thoughts so delightfully and always in beautiful flowing verse. You are an extremely talented and thoughtful writer.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely dedication to Judi at this time of grief. Your friendship and support shine through this sincerely expressed rhyming verse with elegant presentation. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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A lovely dedication to Judi at this time of grief. Your friendship and support shine through this sincerely expressed rhyming verse with elegant presentation. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from mermaids
Excellent heart felt words that express emotion and condolences to Judi. I have been a fan of Judi's since I entered the world of Fanstory and feel for her loss.
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Excellent heart felt words that express emotion and condolences to Judi. I have been a fan of Judi's since I entered the world of Fanstory and feel for her loss.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Debi
What a beautiful rhymed poem for Judiverse. I am reading many poems dedicated to her, it's such a beautiful gesture.
The rhyme and meter are perfect. The presentation is beautiful.
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Hello Debi
What a beautiful rhymed poem for Judiverse. I am reading many poems dedicated to her, it's such a beautiful gesture.
The rhyme and meter are perfect. The presentation is beautiful.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from Annmuma
A beautifully written poem, Debi. I was unaware of Judi's loss. Losing a mate is painful and one who has been a part of who you are for 60 years is more than difficult. I've heard people say 'You'll get over it.' One does not 'get over' grief; one must travel through it. My heart goes out to Judy. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful poem. ann
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A beautifully written poem, Debi. I was unaware of Judi's loss. Losing a mate is painful and one who has been a part of who you are for 60 years is more than difficult. I've heard people say 'You'll get over it.' One does not 'get over' grief; one must travel through it. My heart goes out to Judy. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful poem. ann
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully said, Debi! Thank you for contributing to Judi's book. I wrote my post before I knew about Pam's book. You are so right that it's always hard to come up with the right words but it's great that you bring up these friends her worldwide who care for Judi.
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Beautifully said, Debi! Thank you for contributing to Judi's book. I wrote my post before I knew about Pam's book. You are so right that it's always hard to come up with the right words but it's great that you bring up these friends her worldwide who care for Judi.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
A very nice poem of condolence, Debi, and I would expect no less from you. You are one of a few whose true feelings come through in your poems.
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A very nice poem of condolence, Debi, and I would expect no less from you. You are one of a few whose true feelings come through in your poems.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from royowen
Yes, it's a wonderful thing to be be in site where there are so many gifted scribes to render comfort for someone like Judy who ahah lost someone as close as Dick, who has been there nigh on sixty, she will need our prayers, without children, but I think she has relatives, beautifully written dear Debi, blessings Roy
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Yes, it's a wonderful thing to be be in site where there are so many gifted scribes to render comfort for someone like Judy who ahah lost someone as close as Dick, who has been there nigh on sixty, she will need our prayers, without children, but I think she has relatives, beautifully written dear Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
love those last two lines about traveling the world without going to far! so true for fanstory!
a beautiful hopeful poem of comfort and caring
smooth flow and rhyme
love the daisy picture
one suggestion i have is maybe to try a white background and black font to blend in with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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love those last two lines about traveling the world without going to far! so true for fanstory!
a beautiful hopeful poem of comfort and caring
smooth flow and rhyme
love the daisy picture
one suggestion i have is maybe to try a white background and black font to blend in with the cool pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Lol, I might have to hire you as my interior decorator. I did put it as white and black font. I do appreciate the feedback and I praise you for being that kind of reviewer and friend. You are very conscientious .
Thanks for the kind words for Judy.
Comment from aryr
This was so special, Debi. Not only for judi and her late husband, Dick but for all of FanStory because of the friends you have made her. Prayers of hope are with judi. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!
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This was so special, Debi. Not only for judi and her late husband, Dick but for all of FanStory because of the friends you have made her. Prayers of hope are with judi. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
