Guided by Faith
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Seth is a police officer, so I am sure he is protective of Emma. The man named Hank, is he a suspicious person? Sounds like he is trouble, being he's trying to ditch Seth's vision.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Seth is a police officer, so I am sure he is protective of Emma. The man named Hank, is he a suspicious person? Sounds like he is trouble, being he's trying to ditch Seth's vision.
Editing when reading is a trend that helps us be better writers.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Hank is just a delivery person here, who owns the lumber company.
Comment from judiverse
A rather calm chapter after the storm. I think it's good to balance those tense moments with some peaceful ones. Clean-up after a storm must be quite an ordeal. As I mentioned, I believe, there was a tornado in a town south of where I live that did considerable damage. I've heard of people talking to their plants, so I'm not surprised Emma would do that. There is still the problem of Emma's stalker. They've not identified him yet, but he isn't going to act when he sees the police chief around. Great work with the development of your story. judi
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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A rather calm chapter after the storm. I think it's good to balance those tense moments with some peaceful ones. Clean-up after a storm must be quite an ordeal. As I mentioned, I believe, there was a tornado in a town south of where I live that did considerable damage. I've heard of people talking to their plants, so I'm not surprised Emma would do that. There is still the problem of Emma's stalker. They've not identified him yet, but he isn't going to act when he sees the police chief around. Great work with the development of your story. judi
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm thinking Seth and Emma will become an couple soon. I'm a bit nervous about whoever it is in the Crown Victoria, why is he spying on Emma? Will Seth find out soon? This could be serious. I am really enjoying your story, Barbara, and can't wait to read on. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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I'm thinking Seth and Emma will become an couple soon. I'm a bit nervous about whoever it is in the Crown Victoria, why is he spying on Emma? Will Seth find out soon? This could be serious. I am really enjoying your story, Barbara, and can't wait to read on. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. It will take a while to discover who this person is. I can promise he's not nice.
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I didn't think he would be. I'll enjoy finding out who he is. xx
Comment from Ben Colder
I Know one thing. A person better read this after eating or he or she will be hungry for breakfast. Good wholesome story. I smell romance cooking or is that the bacon burning.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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I Know one thing. A person better read this after eating or he or she will be hungry for breakfast. Good wholesome story. I smell romance cooking or is that the bacon burning.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I do tend to use food in the artwork. LOL
Comment from Jay Squires
A good, and detailed, interaction between Seth and Emma. I was left with the feeling of being right there with them every step of the way. For your stories, that's good. For a less seasoned writer, I'd be tempted to say he or she should abbreviate much of it, but you bring it off with pinache!
"The lack of sparkle in your eyes tells me there's something on your mind. [Wow, I should be so perceptive!]
Good job, Barbara.
Jay
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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A good, and detailed, interaction between Seth and Emma. I was left with the feeling of being right there with them every step of the way. For your stories, that's good. For a less seasoned writer, I'd be tempted to say he or she should abbreviate much of it, but you bring it off with pinache!
"The lack of sparkle in your eyes tells me there's something on your mind. [Wow, I should be so perceptive!]
Good job, Barbara.
Jay
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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LOL I think Seth enjoys her eyes. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Seth is very thorough in his methods. He is very caring and very determined to catch the stalker .This is very thrilling and I am dying to know more about him.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Seth is very thorough in his methods. He is very caring and very determined to catch the stalker .This is very thrilling and I am dying to know more about him.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I really like Seth and Emma. By the way Emma is my grand mother and one of my favorite cousin's name. Sadly both are deceased. I loved and miss them very much. This story has some delightful elements and I feel, the potential to please and excite fans of your wonderful creative talents going forward. Keep at it.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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I really like Seth and Emma. By the way Emma is my grand mother and one of my favorite cousin's name. Sadly both are deceased. I loved and miss them very much. This story has some delightful elements and I feel, the potential to please and excite fans of your wonderful creative talents going forward. Keep at it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I'm sure your grandma and your cousin were stop ladies.
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Thank you. My grandma was legendary, my cousin was my heart.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You've got me hooked, Barb. I think this is going to be a really good story. Keeping the suspense about the guy in the Crown Vic is a good idea.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You've got me hooked, Barb. I think this is going to be a really good story. Keeping the suspense about the guy in the Crown Vic is a good idea.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! A little bird told me it's your birthday. Please have a blessed day. Thank you for the kind review.
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Thanks, Barb.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I like the way Seth has an eye on absolutely everything. I suppose it goes with the job. Also, calling Molly fur ball gives her real character. Another aggreable post. kay
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easily assessable > (perhaps) easily accessible
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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I like the way Seth has an eye on absolutely everything. I suppose it goes with the job. Also, calling Molly fur ball gives her real character. Another aggreable post. kay
To think about:
easily assessable > (perhaps) easily accessible
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement and the help. I have the change.