Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is a feeling of happiness and joy in your birthday wishes to Paul. I have read many of his writings and he has such an interesting biography. Your words and lines are smooth with an almost musical feel and flow to them. Excellent birthday poem to one of Fanstory's best.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

A very nice happy birthday to a wonderful writer. You are correct in saying that he helps the writers on this site, myself Included. I'll bet he's very pleased with your greeting. Thanks foe Sharing. :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi Debi
What a great Birthday tribute that you have written to Paul McFarland. He is such a great writer in fact one of my very favorites. I'm sure he will be very happy with this lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Jen.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your birthday/tribute poem to Paul was well
thought out, Debi. I enjoyed reading it. I learned
many things about him. Your rhymes worked well.
Your presentation made a great birthday card. Your
kindness and huge heart were obvious here. The
merry go round style you devised was a great choice.
It was fun but still informative.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Happy birthday, Paul. With the poem that Debi wrote, I bet you feel ten feet tall. I'm wondering just what is the title of this book? Is it on Amazon? A swinging poem for sure!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, I don't know what the title is but it is on Amazon. so very sorry that this is late. I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute poem with us. Yes, Paul is a wonderful author and a great guy. I have enjoyed his poems and his reviews.

And always does it from his heart, because he's our friend Paul & Your reviews show us this quality, our loyal dear friend Paul (comma needed after 'friend')

And while you do, we wish for you, a Happy Birthday Paul (comma after 'Birthday')

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Barb, what would I do without you. I am always rushing at the last minute and forgetting those little buggers. Thank you for your kind words for Paul, and for your wonderful feedback. I need to be more careful, but I do love hearing from you. HUGS

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Thanks, Debi. Number seventy-nine, but who's counting. Not me. When I worked in the fishing industry, I did not go on the boats. I worked in the office, trying to make things go smoothly. I get sea sick when I'm on a large boat. Send me your address, and I will send you one of my books.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Hey Paul, so happy to hear from the birthday boy. I hope you liked it, yet I know it is hard to do you justice. The comment about being in the water was kind of a joke and complement all in one. Saying that you look so good, that you must have found the fountain of youth water. And yes, I did think you were one of the fisherman when I referred to it. I thought it was kinda clever. I would love your book. Thank you so much and I will send it to you in a pm. Once again my friend, have a wonderful birthday!!

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I think that there is something different and special about those of us born in the month of April. I don't know what it is, but it has to be something special. Especially f it serves to bring out and highlight the poetic talents of our wonderful friend and supporter, the Awesome, Always On Time, MS Debie Pick Marquette.
You did good sis.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This merry-go-rhyme poem, Happy Birthday, Paul, has the proper formatting and reminds us or lets us know about Paul and his work and helpfulness. .........................................

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

I loved the thought conveyed in this read, making me want to actually know Paul. I felt the inspiring attributes of this individual and its touching aspects within the writer's heart. A super shout out about an unique person in my given viewpoint. Well said.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Hi, so very sorry that this is late.I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!