Guided by Faith
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I think its hysterical that Seth calls her dog Furball. Like it isn't officially a real dog. I liked the added intrigue of the birth mothers boyfriend and extortion. This story is amazing up the suspense. Great job, Barbara.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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I think its hysterical that Seth calls her dog Furball. Like it isn't officially a real dog. I liked the added intrigue of the birth mothers boyfriend and extortion. This story is amazing up the suspense. Great job, Barbara.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this kind review. Seth will eventually learn that there is a dog under that fur. LOL
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
You create an atmosphere of fear and suspense on the return to Emma's cabin. The relationship between Seth and Emma seems to have 'potential'.
You manage the conversation very well.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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You create an atmosphere of fear and suspense on the return to Emma's cabin. The relationship between Seth and Emma seems to have 'potential'.
You manage the conversation very well.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Best wishes!
Comment from Jim Wile
Nicely written, Barbara. The mystery deepens as we wonder who it is that has broken into Emma's house and what do they want? And now we find out Emma was adopted, and she doesn't even know it.
You're keeping me in suspense, as I'm not quite sure where you're going with this, but it's certain that Emma and Seth are growing closer in the process. Great job! Jim
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Nicely written, Barbara. The mystery deepens as we wonder who it is that has broken into Emma's house and what do they want? And now we find out Emma was adopted, and she doesn't even know it.
You're keeping me in suspense, as I'm not quite sure where you're going with this, but it's certain that Emma and Seth are growing closer in the process. Great job! Jim
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I can promise it will all come together, eventually.
Comment from nomi338
I'm gone. I was enjoying the dialog when you hit me with "that thing you call a dog." That killed me. The story is awesome so far. If you insist on putting in zingers like that, you are going to knock me out time and time again. Awesome!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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I'm gone. I was enjoying the dialog when you hit me with "that thing you call a dog." That killed me. The story is awesome so far. If you insist on putting in zingers like that, you are going to knock me out time and time again. Awesome!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Seth isn't sure there's a dog under all that fur. LOL He will eventually learn there is.