Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

Wow. What a moving poem about a sweet girl. You are very good at poetry. Now you have inspired me to write one, too about Spain, of course.

Excellent and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thanks for a great review and six stars. I know you are enjoying your visit to Spain. I look forward to reading your poem.
Beth

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, this young girl is still wise beyond her years because she understands how precious life is, even a sparrow's life. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate the review and comments. I wept over dead birds as a child.
Beth

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Your poetry says volumes in so few words. I love the artwork you attached, as it adds even more meaning to the words you wrote. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thank you for a lovely review and comments.
Beth

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Beautifully-rendered, Beth,
And Kayla will grow up to be a nurturing and loving steward to nature.
Life and death are all part of the cycle of life. One can be knowledgeable in "the ways of nature," and still weep... I certainly do...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thank you, Diane. I love all the wild creatures. I like watching the birds, especially and I know they don't have long life spans but I hate it when I see one dead. As a child, I wept like Kayla. I apprecaite the lovely review.